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[amaya_natsuya]

Okay, so I'm running a little behind with fanfiction.  You're not allowed to kill me because I can't finish the story if I'm dead!  So there!  :P

Seriously, though.  Work takes up more time than school, I think, even if I don't have homework and I'm just always tired!  But I'm trying to get in the habit of bi-weekly updates, which will hopefully

Comments

[artimusdin]

Overall, I like it. The only part I'm kinda "Eh" about is the part just after Quatre and Harry 'connect', I suppose. The way the others react doesn't fit. *scratches her head* Wish I could put it into words better for you.

[white_panda_san]

weeeee!!! You updated!! I can't wait for more. I really love this story.

[taku_aiden]

You have no idea how happy I was when I got on and noticed you'd posted! I love this story so much it's probably unhealthy. I think it could have been longer, but that's just because I didn't want ot stop reading it. I like the way you portray Ali though, I should htink a child who went from an abusive environment into one like the gundam pilot's home would be comforted to have someone yell at him every now and then before getting around to the normal response of being comforted by someone being nice to him. I like it!

Taku

Chapter 17

[anonymous]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad that the next chapter came out, I checked for it every day.
This one is really good. I think you did a really good job portraying the confusion Harry feels, and his inability to describe it or accept that he is loved. The thing with his magic, I was not expecting, though it was a pleasant surprise.
Hopefully they have now made some headway in teaching Harry that he is loved and wanted. But how will Ali react to his outburst?
~heeroduoyaoi

loved this fanfiction

[anonymous]

that was a great new chapter i hope you update again soon. I found everything great exspecially the part where harry is feeling insecure of himself and his new family. you portrayed that really well. I love this fanfiction girl keep it and update soon again please can't really wait for the next chapter. gonna check everyday to see if you have a new update but no pressure about it i waited for a few weeks and I can wait again until the next chapter.