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Fic: The Grandfather Paradox

May 09, 2007 20:01

Title: The Grandfather Paradox

Author: Amazon X

Rating: NC-17

Summary: What you do in the present affects the future, even in the past.
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Comments 31

maddiec24 May 10 2007, 00:37:19 UTC

Oh my. I really needed this tonight, sweetie. It was wonderful. I can very much imagine it going this way. Your Ianto is wonderful, and you captured the good *and* not so good aspects of Jack's character perfectly. I hope you'll be writing more TW.

Thank you! amazonx May 10 2007, 00:45:43 UTC

I needed that. If I get more inspiration, I will!

batagur May 10 2007, 00:43:09 UTC

Lovely! :D

Thank you! amazonx May 10 2007, 00:46:16 UTC

Worth the wait?

Re: Thank you! batagur May 10 2007, 01:07:52 UTC

Oh yes it was!

Re: Thank you! amazonx May 10 2007, 01:18:25 UTC

*snuggles you* And you reminded me to take the protection off my comments, so that people who may not be on my flist can comment to me.

shirafuzzy May 10 2007, 01:37:07 UTC

Very amazing fic here. Absolutely loved it. XD

Thank you! amazonx May 10 2007, 02:02:56 UTC

I really appreciate that!

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Thank you for your comments! amazonx May 10 2007, 11:57:08 UTC

I absolutely appreciate your comments, and I know they weren't meant in anything accept the spirit of good writing. Normally, when I do write 3rd person, I stick to ONE character's POV. I tried doing both, but I think this story may have been better served from Ianto's POV most the way through, accept those little jaunts to the other character's thoughts at the beginning. I'm so glad you liked it. I would love to write more in this fandom. My problem? I need inspiration for a good story! Thanks again!

kerry_louise May 10 2007, 09:34:11 UTC

A wonderful fic. I think it captures Jack and Ianto and the rest of the team perfectly. And it is a great veiw of how Jack's return could be... *and* how his trip back in time could have affected things. Greatness :)

Thank you! amazonx May 10 2007, 12:05:12 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!