Could you please look up "Comma" in the index of any English grammar book and try to apply what's there? I've given up trying to read your journal entries, because they're nothing but solid blocks of text with absolutely no pauses. If your speech flowed like your text, you'd be blue in the face! Trying to untangle long, imbedded sentences without any "road map" punctuation is nearly impossible, and while I'd love to know what you have to say, I can't wade through that Gordian knot of verbiage to find out what, precisely, you're talking about.
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Thank you,
Erin
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