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Feb 21, 2007 22:14

A Most Advantageous Match
Chapter 11: Lovers’ Quarrels
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Chapter 11: Lovers' Quarrels )

a most advantageous match

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phyrablaze February 22 2007, 04:43:38 UTC
FWAHA. FINALLY.

...ahem, yes. so i don't think i've made a comment before this, because at first i told myself i wasn't going to read this because i don't generally like stories placed in the past... too much of that women-hating-obligatory shit back then and such.
but i was curious.
and oh my god, woman, you drug this out.

but it was marvelous.

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marie_j_granger February 22 2007, 06:29:22 UTC
*grins madly* I'll echo the 'finally!' comment, but I think it's been paced well. And I'm assuming it's not over yet.

One minor caveat -- I don't know that a woman's parts would've been called her sex during the Regency era. I don't know what it *would* have been called, but that pulled me out of the story a tiny bit. Not much, mind you, as it was quite hot.

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madderbrad February 22 2007, 06:41:16 UTC
*Finally*, yes.

And they owe it all to Malfoy ?!?!?!?!?!

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demosthenes91 February 22 2007, 06:42:51 UTC
That was fabulous!!! So much worth the wait! And I love how you made it angsty, then fluffy, that smutty with just a bit of humor!

Yep, absolutely worth it!

And it was sweet how fearful she was when he got out of bed... I think he's going to have to convince his wife of his affections a bit more... *nudge*

Thanks so much for giving us this!

:^)

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lelymarques February 22 2007, 13:33:14 UTC
oh! I already reviewed in portkey but anyway... great chapter! So well placed and it turned out so cute and fluffy with all their shyness hehehe
Great!

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