Just an Ordinary Love Story (that's what we are): Part Six

Oct 24, 2010 19:27

[American Idol] [David Archuleta/David Cook] [PG-13]

OH MY GOD AT LAST. This part was ridiculous to write, just because it was so emotionally (and physically) draining, and asdofkgfsf so, so much love goes out to ssdimes for her generosity. Apparently, my brain was trying to work out the best way to get your 6,000 words to you as soon as possible, bb, ( Read more... )

length: multi-chapter, category: charity fic, series: wedding date verse, fandom: american idol, category: au, pairing: david archuleta/david cook

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bloodbelieve October 24 2010, 11:50:28 UTC
DON'T MIND ME, JUST HOLDING THIS COMMENT FOR LATER

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epicflailer October 27 2010, 08:54:28 UTC
YOU WERE FIRST, THAT IS THE IMPORTANT THING. ♥_____♥

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bloodbelieve November 3 2010, 09:59:35 UTC
HI, SO. I AM BACK. First of all, oh my gosh, the beginning is totally hot. Like -- you're so amazing at writing UST, IDK. Jealous of your skills, and David, and Coooooook, shjkfdshfsd. You're totally one of my favourite writers of them and I remember why everytime I read something new from you, because they're just so in character and perfect and I actually see them in my head as I read it which I think is really awesome and something that I don't find enough, with fic ( ... )

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epicflailer November 4 2010, 07:45:42 UTC
............OH MY GOD. AAAAAAACE.

FML.

THE AMOUNT OF TIME I SPENT STARING STARRY-EYED AT THIS COMMENT IS KIND OF EMBARRASSING I'M NOT EVEN GONNA LIE. holy crap, BEST FEEDBACK EVER. *________________*

I AM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS, FORREALS. IT'S LIKE GETTING THE ACEFACE STAMP OF APPROVAL. IT IS NECESSARY LIKE BREATHING.

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duckgirlie October 24 2010, 12:46:30 UTC
Ahhhhh So this is amazing and even though it's not tense I still feel unbelievably tense reading it because I just know something bad is about to happen...

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epicflailer October 27 2010, 08:54:46 UTC
bwahaha! i am too transparent! tysm for r&ring!

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pixiebeanz October 24 2010, 12:51:51 UTC
!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU POSTED. PLACE HOLDING, I WILL BE BACK LATER WITH FLAIL.

AJKSDJFL EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, EXCITED.

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pixiebeanz October 24 2010, 17:33:18 UTC
GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I LOVE THIS VERSE SO MUCH. ♥ ♥ ♥

this was one of the first cookleta stories i really fell for and idk the way you write them together still leaves me feeling all happy and squeeful and beamy and ajdkfjdggl booooooys. <33333 i am slightly giddy, can you tell? i love how they look out for each other from jazzy's meltdown, to michael, to the bacherlorette party. which, that made me ragey, but then when cook went on to tell david how amazing he was, i was just *______________* and cheering him on. and, david's family is amazing, ilthem.

BASICALLY, ADMIST ALL THAT RAMBLING, WHAT I AM TRYING TO SAY, IS THAT I THINK THIS IS WONDERFUL.

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epicflailer October 27 2010, 08:57:47 UTC
ASIDLKSFOSIDDKGF YOUR FEEDBACK IS WONDERFULLLLLLLLLLLLL~

i am getting gleeful just reading about YOU getting gleeful. ngl, every time i write these two IT IS LIKE COMING HOME. <3333333333333

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ciudad October 24 2010, 13:36:33 UTC
oh my god.

this is a-fucking-mazing. an emotional rollercoaster of giddy lightheadedness (COOK AND ARCHIE DANCING, oh archie i am right there swooning with you) to that heartbreakingly awful bachelorette party -- and your david voice is delightful, did you know that? and also, did you know that the way you write david's family is always, always lovely? and that i love absolutely every gorgeous, pitch-perfect word here? i am sure you do, because you are awesome ♥♥♥

(dammit, nat! i was trying for ~articulate~ and i ended up being rambly and nonsensical in the face of your prose. &you;)

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epicflailer October 27 2010, 09:00:37 UTC
awiofkljhodfjghfiojd EVERY TIME YOU POST A COMMENT ON MY FIC I STILL DO THE JAZZHANDS. IT IS EXCITING, OKAY.

and then i actually sit down and read your comment, and it is like *___________* FOREVER. YOU ARE A-FUCKING-MAZING, AND I AM GLAD YOU ARE STILL ENJOYING THIS VERSE.

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penrith1 October 24 2010, 14:04:48 UTC
I can hardly believe there is a new chapter. Hurrah. This is one of my all time favourites and I've been holding a place for it for ages. Please I don't care how long it takes you must finish it. So there.
This new chapter was delicious. To see David get some loving was terrific. To see how protective they are of each other was lovely. Your david is adorable and caring and good and your Cook is a dreamboat.

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epicflailer October 27 2010, 09:01:25 UTC
heeeeeee! thank you so much for being patient and waiting this out! i'm thrilled you still enjoy it, and i absolutely plan on finishing this, though i cannot say when that will be!

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