Fic ~ When the Spiral Comes to a Close

[amh1988]

And so we reach the end…
I don’t really have a whole lot to say at this point except that I have really kind of pushed the limits of my PG-13 rating in this. There’s no note from me at the end so just…. ENJOY!
Thank you to

Comments

[shoaichou]

The end comes fast >< I want more I want more!!^0^

Aiba is always Aiba.^x^ and I really fall in love with Sho chan when he gave the spiral to his Aiba chan. So so Sweet&Romantic. Really happy for them:)

Thanks for writing this lovely series and making Sakuraibe to be a happy couple :D

Looking forward to seeing your Sakuraiba fics soon^^

[amh1988]

It did come fast. (goes back to check) I only started writing this in late July!? Eeep! 33,000 words in five weeks? I obviously need to find a more productive use of my down time.

Or not.

I think part of why I wrote this so quickly was because I was eager to put Sakuraiba back together again. (After I broke them in the first place.) That said, I have more stuff already in the works. and at least one almost ready to be posted. (I have to type up the hand-written copy.)

Thank you for reading and your support! ♥

[mintceres]

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thank you for that great fluffy not at all pg13 ending ^^

my fav was: “Who knows? But if he is listening, he’s either about to be put off eavesdropping for life or receive some rather interesting education. Probably both.”
[...]
“That’s already been taken care of. It’ll be a long time before my little brother is brave enough to listen at my bedroom door again.”
omg poor kid xD he will be scarred for life 8D

and thank you for the happy birthday ~<3
I am really happy now then arashi DreamAlive shirt has also something to do with that

thanks and I will check out your future fics!

[amh1988]

Technically, it IS PG-13. (I know the rules, so I know how far I can take it.) I never actually mention sex. It's just strongly implied and there is a lot of innuendo. I had to be careful with the narative though, not to take it over the edge. ¬_¬ XD

Saying that, Sho's brother is what 15/16 now? He probably already knows it all already. ^_^' (Whereas Aiba will blush every time he goes over to Sho's house for dinner.)

Thanks for reading, and I hope you had a great time on you birthday! ♥

[anonymous]

haha...I think you ended it perfectly! Great job you did on this entire series! =)I'll be looking forward to more of your stories! ^^~b

[shiyun88]

oops, that was me. Forgot to log-in...=P

[amh1988]

Thank you! ♥
I'm quite proud of myself right now, so would you mind if I bask shamelessly in your praise? ;)

[shiyun88]

:)) You deserve it, go ahead! =D

[asyuraniel]

"and there is no way I’m telling. It would ruin all my fun!”... this is really epic... but he sound like nino a bit... and is there something or anything with ohmiya in this series??? just asking in your own POV of this series...
i understand that ohmiya always has some love with them

[amh1988]

It does sound a little like Nino, doesn't it? But then, they've been friends for so long that it probably just rubbed off on him. That and I just have this image that Aiba likes to tease his mother (and she teases him in return).

As for the Ohmiya. Yeah, I didn't write them a 'couple' in this story, but I know that there a lot of people on my friends list who like them. (Well, one really, but it's a loooong story) Anyway, Not written as Ohmiya from my POV but deliberately made to appear vague so that 'certain reader(s)' could view them that way. Does that make sense?

[asyuraniel]

i understand.. dont worry it does make sense as ohmiya itself that does not make sense... yes i agree with you that ohmiya is a verrrrryyyy lloooooonggg story...

[ayumi_kitty]

ahhhhh~ that was so so so PERFECT!!!

I love the cho kawaii fluff, i love the --to take someone's words-- almostR Sakuraiba scenes, i love Aiba's mom, I love Ohno being lonely, I love the subtle ohmiya, i love Sho's gift for Aiba, i love Aiba's reason, I love the deep meaning in the Spiral, I love nino's handcuffs, i love at the fact that he uses the handcuffs for... Magic (loool), and i love Aiba's last line!!

I love you for writing such a poignant and awesome fic, i love you for finishing thos, despite the fact that you mentioned that you don't prefer to write a series, i love jenny_desu for giving the idea!

Simply said, I LOVE THIS!!!! <3

[amh1988]

Ooooh.... That's A LOT of love~

Here's a bit of trivia for you, the 'spiral' was originally going to be Aiba's gift to Sho in the prologue. I changed it to the Ouroborus at the last minute when I decided that it seemed odd to have that at the start, right before things start to 'spiral' out of control. Then again, when jenny first asked me to write this, before I started planning anything, I was going to do it as a two parter, maybe three.

Then I got ambitous. I'm so glad I didn't fail this time! Hopefully, this will give me the confidence to try another series in the furture, huh?

Thanks so much for reading! I'll let you know as soon as your request is done. (I started it today, and I'm about 30% finished)

[ayumi_kitty]

Oh, that is profound... but I agree, I liked the fact that you put the spiral gift up till the end of the series ;) Makes it more meaningful ^^ And of course you didn't fail, dearie! In fact, you pulled this off very successfully.

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Weeee~! You're fast! I'll wait paitently for that ^^

Thankies~