Fic ~ When the Spiral Comes to a Close

Sep 05, 2009 12:19

And so we reach the end…
I don’t really have a whole lot to say at this point except that I have really kind of pushed the limits of my PG-13 rating in this. There’s no note from me at the end so just…. ENJOY!
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sakuraiba, pg-13, muli-chapter, fanfiction

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iedahmoin September 5 2009, 18:08:58 UTC
awesome sakuraiba...
tq for your hardwork and pliz do write more of sakuraiba

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amh1988 September 6 2009, 04:13:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. And I do have more Sakuraiba stuff (both planned and completed) listed on my main page. Feel free to take a look. ♥

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magicalsong September 5 2009, 19:29:02 UTC
*sobs* I can't believe it's finally the end ]:

I'm going to try to make this comment as long as I can, with understandable words. (Yes no key smashing involved :P

“Is it really OK? I don’t have my gift with me right now - I was going to give it to you at my place tomorrow - er, I guess I mean tonight now huh? Or is it just later today? Since it’s after midnight… but it’s not that late, so-”

Ah, Aiba-chan is so very adorable [: But I always say things like this too, because I really don't understand it. xD

“Nino? Why would he even own a pair of handcuffs?”

Oh I'm sure he has his uses... involving Oh-chan >:D

The tall man’s eyes shot open. “They have keys!?”

Just, perfect. ;~; KAAAAAAAAAAH. How do I express how much I love you right now? D: Cause this is seriously just... AHHHHHHH. xD

But thank you a lot <3 I'm glad I stuck with this story all the way through [: I really loved how it ended too [:

Sakuraiba, please don't ever change. ♥

Thanks so much for writing! I'm going to miss commenting on this fic :P Thank youuu! < ( ... )

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amh1988 September 6 2009, 04:20:00 UTC
I get confued about today/tomorrow/later all the time. But then, I work nights too, so each day seems to bleed into the next anyway.

Yes, Nino owns handcuffs. And if you ask Ohno, he'll tell you they really are "magic"! XD

How about virtual hugs? Those are a always a good way to so someone you care. *HUGS* And I really appreciate that you stayed with me to the end. Thank you! ♥

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sieda September 5 2009, 19:59:39 UTC
This was a very cute story and I loved it!

I waited until the story was completed and I read it all at once. I especially love how tight the bond in Arashi was through out the entire thing. While the story was about Aiba and Sho's relationship the rest were very much involved as well.

Thank you for sharing your story with us!

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amh1988 September 6 2009, 04:23:52 UTC
Thank you very much!

I tend to wait until a story is finished before stated to read it to. (Even a series of novels) So I understand. I'm happy that you noticed how I tried to protray the rest of Arashi too. I was afraid I wasn't giving enough empathsis to that, but you saw it. Thank you.

And thank you for reading and letting me know that you enjoyed it. ♥

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uniquelyobscure September 5 2009, 21:07:58 UTC
LOL. Nino not giving keys.... even though my favorite is Aiba... and Sho is a close second... something about Nino... sometimes he steals those places in a blink of the eye.

Why didnt you write that in. Why did you ruin Nino's plotting? OMG. Would have been great. Damn you!

This is my favorite chapter, just because there is so much implied smut they are both so happy.

Thank you x 100 for writing this.

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amh1988 September 6 2009, 04:28:43 UTC
OMG, I know exactly what you mean! You have just described how I feel exactly. o_O

Sorry, need I remind you that this fic is PG-13? (I don't change ratings with chapters).

But fear not! I completely an utterly 'grown-up' Sakuraiba NC-17 today. Your request, I believe? I just have to type it (I write everything by hand first) and it should be posted early next week. How does that sound?

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uniquelyobscure September 6 2009, 07:22:51 UTC
I used to hate Nino the most. I felt like he was rude to the other members at first... then it slowly came that is just his personality and how he shows his love lol.

Yea yea, I know. I just felt sad bummed that Nino had to have his plan ruined.

I cant wait for the fic! I am so excited. Thank you for writing it once again, I hope you didn't have too much trouble. Sounds good. I shall try to sit patiently. Try is the key word there haha.

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arashiku September 5 2009, 21:26:41 UTC
Haha this was cute ^^ I really liked it :D I cant wait for an update from you :) Still not feeling that well but this cheered me up a bit. Aiba is so adorably dorky XD And Sho is so cute! >< This was a really good epilogue. :3
~Michi

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amh1988 September 6 2009, 04:42:58 UTC
Thanks sweetie! ♥
Feel better soon OK? I want you in top shape when I post that Masatoshi, alright? ;)

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