Fic ~ When the Spiral Comes to a Close

[amh1988]

And so we reach the end…
I don’t really have a whole lot to say at this point except that I have really kind of pushed the limits of my PG-13 rating in this. There’s no note from me at the end so just…. ENJOY!
Thank you to

Comments

[nuraisha]

omg..i hate dat it end...
but the ending was well-written. soooo cute...
thanks for ur effort...i totally enjoyed it...

[amh1988]

Whoa, I can't believe to read (and commented) on it all in one go. I'm impressed. This is 33,000 words or so, you know. That's the size of a small novel! O.o

I should be thank you for your effort. And I will. Thank you. I'm glad you had fun reading.

[thetagal13]

The ending was so perfect. It really was a long 2 weeks for Aiba and Sho huh. But at least they have a happy ending.

Ohno not noticing Nino is touching him is so cute. That guy space off so much that he din notice or he got too used to it. I think its the latter.

"They have keys!?" That line rocks. Nino purposely omitted that very important information huh. That is so Nino-like.

Thanks for the fic! Its a great story and i thoroughly enjoyed it!

[amh1988]

A loooong two weeks for them. a quick six weeks (from start to finish) for me. But they definately earned their happily ever after, don't you think?

Or maybe Ohno knows that Nino's still touch him as normal, but like a drug, thats not enough anymore; he needs a higher doseage. XD

Yep, Nino didn't give Aiba the keys (because he's a brat sometimes) But Aiba didn't ask for them. Maybe he thinks "magic" handcuffs don't need keys? But then, he only assumed they were for magic tricks, didn't he? Silly Aiba.... you should know better than to trust Nino completely when there is bondage involved. (At least Matsujun won't change the 'safety word' halfway through.) >_<

And thank you for sticking with me to the end! I couldn't have done it without the encouragement and support of everyone who read and commented on the story. *End Oscar Speech* Ahem... Thank you! ♥

[crafty381]

wow.. this really is worth reading.. and honestly, this is the first fanfic i've ever read.. kudos to you! you really did great with this.. hope you'll write more sakuraiba fics.. =)

[amh1988]

I'm your first? How touching....
(Wow~ it sounds sooo wrong~ ¬_¬
Anyway. Thank you for reading, and I just hope I haven't put you off reading more fanfiction (or anything really) in the future. ^.^

[animemanga1994]

awww!!! sooo happy that sakuraiba has a happy ending!!! luv the part where aiba says he told his mom ages ago! cute ohno being jealous<3 really great story!!!

[amh1988]

Hee hee. You know, I only added the part about Aiba's mother because I thought I should make it clear that Saukraiba wouldn't be having any more 'family problems'. I added the Ohmiya-ish-ness(?) because it amused me. XD

Thanks for reading! ♥

[zukkoke_iero]

SORRY! SORRY! BUT I'LL BE VEEEEEEERYYYYYY RANDOM THIS TIME......
NE? NE? NE? NE?

hehehehehe....

Gyaaaaa........ i don know why i love when sho threw away his laptop to give Aiba his full attention... it's just few lines and I went screaaaaam... >,>

“Ah~ that…” ==>>>>>> THIS~! THIS! i giggling too much here~~~ *double dies*

“Ooooh… Sho-chan~” =>>> zukko: "Oooooh... Aibaaaaaaaa"

OHHH!!! AND THEY'RE STILL IN SAKURAIS'S RESIDENCE, NO? NO? NO?
Oooohhh... skuraibaaaaa... aiba... be louder then!!! no one would mind that XDDD

[zukkoke_iero]

uh... i'm so excited that not realized that I double-clicked enter and tab and it posted... >,>
okay... continue! dies!

“Fine, I got it. From now on, whenever I’m touching Satoshi, I’ll make sure that Satoshi knows he’s being touched. How’s that?”
SERIOUSLY!!! NINO!!! HE'S JUST ACTING SPACEY JUST TO BE CUTE SO THAT YOU'D TOUCH HIM AGAIN AGAIN AND AGAIN XDDDDDDD

I'm soooo sooooo soooooooo in love with this XDDDD
you. the story. all of it!!! I'm sad it's ended... >,>
Thanks for adding ohmiya there...
wawawawawawa~~~
♥ for sho chan
♥ for aibaby~
♥ for Oh chan
♥ for Nino
♥ for jun
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥for you♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[amh1988]

It all your fault, you know. Ohmiya just seems to worm their way into almost everything I write. I can't help it.

And put so much semi-smut in this chapter, it nearly isn't PG-13 anymore... LOL!

But I'm glad you liked it. Even though it couldn't have been easy to read. I'm glad you stuck around and were able to enjoy it. I'm happy that you noticed all those moments that are favourites of mine too. And I'm happy and sad to see this story come to an end.

It does, however, mean I can start working on other thing. like and Arashi threesome or an Ohmiya AU I've had stuck in my head for a while. ;)

*SUPERRRRR SQUISHHH* (That's a great BIG hug by the way.) XD