I love your comments almost as much as the story. I had to stop reading from time to time just to catch my breath from giggling so hard. Thank you for sharing this.
Don't ever get out of bed on four hours sleep and try to write coherent responses. Just knock the first bit off and go with the makes a nice bookend feel.
I give you major props not only for this fic, which was wonderful *sorry for the late feedback on this!!* But also for doing the commentary, I love it because you loved what I did, like the cuddling..I swear John really is a secret cuddler, he really must be. And the knees touching, the calves pressed together, for me, that was not only sweet, but incredibly hot, yes, slash is great, but it's those little moments that can be just as fulfilling to read.
Thank you for not only writing the story but for doing the commentary as well!!
huh. icon becomes terribly appropriate, now i think of it...shihadchickJuly 24 2006, 12:44:16 UTC
okay, so i squeed more or less incoherantly over how much i adored the original story (and, if i didn't? the fact i'm dreaming about leaving feedback should probably worry me...) but the commentary here? that pretty much elevates this to one of the best things ever. oh, MAN. i absolutely loved this, it was great to reread and get a bit of a peek into how you crafted it, and all the backstory and snark and just... glee. love it to teeny tiny pieces. *flails in mute illustration of just. how. much.*
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Too, too funny. Really.
Plus, I'd say stop sharing my kinks but that would lead to not having them in stories and, just no.
Much as I loved the funny ending, that one completes the circle much better. Unless of course I have the wrong story here, in which case, ignore me :)
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This is the same ending as in the story...
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Don't ever get out of bed on four hours sleep and try to write coherent responses. Just knock the first bit off and go with the makes a nice bookend feel.
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Why do you writers threaten the ones you love? Why?
::cries::
Monty Python. I don't know what it is, but I really like putting their words into Rodney's mouth.
It's just imperative in this fandom, isn't it? Although, I had John be the one asking about rat sorbet....
a really wrong Holy Grail moment
"And then the oral sex!" See?
Hands out buckets and mops to everyone.
Ah, thanks, I needed that.
Truly, I love this fic. Love love love.
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Thank you for not only writing the story but for doing the commentary as well!!
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