Wonderful commentary! The little backstory elements add another dimension to the story and you highlighted many of my favorite parts. I too have a cuddle/touching kink so there is much love for this story!!
I. Love. This. Image. Just two of them separate by a wall, pressing up against the same place. John all nonchalant on the floor, legs out and crossed casually at the ankle, back firmly against the wall, head tilted back, talking to the ceiling. Hand oh so carefully pressed flat against the wall next to him.
Rodney on the other side, on the floor, temple pressed against the wall, hand flat where John's heart would be. Yearning.
I did kind of wonder why they didn't try jerking off for each other. With Rodney giving a continuous running description of what would be happening if they weren't on opposite sides of the room.
and how could forget he didn't know and how could he forget he didn't know
placed his palm firmly against the wall, weeks of feeling placed his palm firmly against the wall. Weeks of feeling
table, and marched right up to Rodney, taking his hand threading table, marched right up to Rodney, and took his hand, threading
I'm glad you did a commentary on this wonderful story. I enjoyed reading about your writing process and your thoughts on the story (and implied backstory). Very interesting. Thanks for sharing.
I know it's been like... forever, and I've already commented on the fic itself, but I really enjoyed your commentary here, and I just wanted you to know that!
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I. Love. This. Image. Just two of them separate by a wall, pressing up against the same place. John all nonchalant on the floor, legs out and crossed casually at the ankle, back firmly against the wall, head tilted back, talking to the ceiling. Hand oh so carefully pressed flat against the wall next to him.
Rodney on the other side, on the floor, temple pressed against the wall, hand flat where John's heart would be. Yearning.
Because...yes. This image makes me melt. Totally.
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I did kind of wonder why they didn't try jerking off for each other. With Rodney giving a continuous running description of what would be happening if they weren't on opposite sides of the room.
and how could forget he didn't know
and how could he forget he didn't know
placed his palm firmly against the wall, weeks of feeling
placed his palm firmly against the wall. Weeks of feeling
table, and marched right up to Rodney, taking his hand threading
table, marched right up to Rodney, and took his hand, threading
Neil Bohr
NIELS!
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Nose bops are still in! they will always be in, dammit!
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