BrigitsFlame, September - Week 1

[amused4ever]

Here we go again! :) Original fic forbrigits_flame.

Title: Parasite (yeah, not much for originality this time)
Prompt: Parasite
Word Count: 1098
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes, it's only a matter of...time.
Author's Notes: Ehhh, not sure what I think about this one. Cookie if you guess what the "parasite" is? :D?

Comments

[ephemeralbreath]

Woah, woah. My favorite piece of yours so far.

Nice mystery-and-reveal type story.

I don't know what the parasite is. :(

[amused4ever]

PHAIL.

(...NO JK I LOVE YOU KELLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. =3=)

[amused4ever]

Close enough! I was going for anger-turned-hatred-turned-insane, so it counts. 8D *gives you internets cookie*

[rephen]

Oh, I really enjoyed this. Very strong and raw. Incredibly well written and vivid. Great piece!

[amused4ever]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[rephen]

SAI~

[amused4ever]

YES~

*WOULD SPAM YOU LIKE CRAZY, BUT IS AT WORK AND AWAY FROM PIC FOLDER FULL OF SAI D:*

[mermaidbia]

Oh wow. Creepy as hell, and still rich and beautiful and incredibly observant. I love how you made her start out with simple, every-day actions to lure us into a false sense of security concerning what's going on, and we only gradually understand what's wrong with this girl. I also love how packed with information the last paragraphs are, about the school and her family problems and everything just coming together. Impressive work. Good luck this week!

[amused4ever]

Thanks! Glad you stopped by to read! :D

[tangledwood]

This is very vivid and dark and great.

[amused4ever]

Thanks!