Forever, Chapter 8

[amytess]

Title: Forever
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me and so on.
Fandom: Charmed
Warnings: Slash, incest, AU,
Pairing: Chris/Wyatt
Rating: PG-13

Chapter 8

Chris looked in shock at his boyfriend standing in the door claiming to be his brother. He stared at him for a full minute before snapping out of his trance. He drew in a shaky breath and turned around to

Comments

[ira_luxuria]

Hi, you probably have no idea who the hell I am but I just wanted to comment on Forever.

I just read all eight chapters and I've got to say this is the first Chris/Wyatt fan fic that I've read and I believe I'm hooked so for that I thank you immensely I'm always looking for a new pairing to get into and it's doubly awesome because it's incest. That probably sounds really fucking weird but I like it and so do you obviously otherwise you wouldn't write it. I'm going to stop rambling for a second and mention a few minor errors I spotted in the entire series so far. Just a few spelling errors really.

But I think and you don't have to pay attention to anything I say if you don't want to but if you put the chapter under an lj-cut it would make things easier for you and for any other readers who want to read it because I know for sure I'm telling all my friends who like Charmed about this fic. You're probably like one of those people who has been on LJ for ages and I'm acting like a right twat so I'll stop and finish with a thank

[amytess]

well, first i have to thank you for your comment because it's like the first i got on livejournal. which shows that i've not been on livejournal like forever but for a few weeks. ;-)
so i'm just grateful for your comment. ;-)
and since i didn't have anyone comment i didn't even think about an lj-cut, but now that you've mentioned it, i will do it. so thanks again.

[ira_luxuria]

You're perfectly welcome. To tell you the truth I found you on the 100_situations claim list and I figured hey why not. So I read Forever and I loved it.
I realised that you'd only been here a few weeks after I checked out your profile I was like oh cool I didn't make much of a twat of myself xD
And again you're welcome because if any of my friends who like Charmed have LJ accounts they may comment as well xD I love spreading the word!

[amytess]

i figured i knew your userpic from somewhere, so that's where i know it from ;-)
like you can see, i already changed all my entries and i find it much better with an lj-cut. so thanks for that.
and if you spread the word, i'm very much happy. ;-) if not, i'm happy too, because even receiving one review makes me happy. ;-)
okay, enough smilies.

[realpestilence]

Wyatt's been raised to suppress his emotions & be calm & responsible all the time, it seems, his powers bound & isolated from his extended kin network; while Chris has been allowed to run wild with no discipline, risking his life hunting demons at a ridiculously young age and getting in trouble. Neither way is all that good.

Chris coaxed Wyatt into being open and taking something he wants for himself. Now Wyatt needs to act as Chris' anchor & help him find balance.

And...they need to stay in the relationship. They're biologically brothers, but they weren't raised together so there's no reason they'd feel brotherly. They're good for each other.

I just found this fic after extended searching for Wyatt/Chris slash and I'm sad it's unfinished. But what's here is good.

[realpestilence]

I was re-reading the fic & was going to say something along this line...again. #lol