Not!Football AU

Apr 20, 2013 00:28

The Theoretical SIG Sauer
Chapter 4
Rating: R
Summary: In which Xabi is an Arsenal fan.
Notes:
1. If you were watching this as a TV show, this would be the filler midseason you'd be bitching about. :p Had to do it this way though cause it's completely spinning out of control.
2. There are 2 ladies to whom I owe this story. One is anaile20gh, who basically ( Read more... )

that was it, been dying to get to this, lol no really

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ferlily1987 April 19 2013, 23:14:01 UTC

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an_only_tree April 27 2013, 02:12:02 UTC
Awww, I can have the bunny? Gracias! :)

I haven't had enough time to polish up the next chapter like I wanted to, but well... it's really cool to see that people are keeping up with it and enjoying it.

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anaile20gh April 19 2013, 23:22:19 UTC
WHAT?????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Oh...

oh

Señor Perez is the bastard then??? And Steven, all the time...was the "good guy"...


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an_only_tree April 27 2013, 00:49:34 UTC
It really was. It's turning so monstrously long though... Not sure that's a good thing.

And Steven, all the time...was the "good guy"...

He doesn't like to be thought of as the good guy. ;)

I'm the only one that thinks that this is sexy???

Um. I seriously doubt that. Let's see how nerdy!Xabi feels about it...

OK, back to editing yet another too long chapter...

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gerlonso April 19 2013, 23:47:38 UTC
Lol You're funny. You always have some really great lines in each chapter.

“Your brilliant invention was going to be a bargaining chip between a group of criminals and any crackpot dictator who could move his oil undetected by any embargo thanks to your boss.”
Poor Xabi :(

Steven glances at Xabi and can see he’s a bit deflated, perhaps more disappointed than surprised that even secret agenting is just another job people like to moan about. “She seems like a nice lady. Reminds me of me gran, stern but polite type,” he says, throwing Xabi a bone.
Aww lol that's so mildly sweet! I'M SUCH A SUCKER. I take whatever I can get tbh lol

the fire Xabi had insisted on engineering into being all by himself
Lol he would.

Steven hadn’t insisted because he wasn’t about to argue about the perfect combustion point of the planned fire, nor about wind velocity with a crazy person
:P

Which makes no sense for a guy who looks like you,
♥ Probably the most handsome man in the world. NO ONE IS IMMUNE.

he’s seen pictures of Alonso’s haircut during his ( ... )

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an_only_tree April 27 2013, 02:20:53 UTC
Lol You're funny.

I've heard that before and not always as a compliment... So thank you!

lol oh god that haircut. I try to avoid looking at any of Xabi's early pictures.

Now you're just begging for it...


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annaisanomalous April 20 2013, 05:24:56 UTC
Yay!

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an_only_tree April 27 2013, 02:21:18 UTC
Yay, you liked it! Awesome!

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missl April 20 2013, 06:06:15 UTC
I have really enjoyed reading this. Strong storyline and characterisation, hooray!

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an_only_tree April 27 2013, 02:21:57 UTC
Thank you so much. It's certainly... a departure for me. Trashy novel writing is fun though!

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