Comments | anaka237: [FIC] Feather (PG-13)

anaka237

Oct 08, 2011 23:25

Title: Feather
Author: anaka237
Beta-reader: kathlynwolf
Pairing: JaeChun
Length: oneshot (867 words)
Genre: angst
Rating: PG-13 (for character's death)
Summary: ( He was holding Yoochun’s hand till the end of the night and only then he disappeared. )

Comments 18

unnamed_flower October 9 2011, 13:11:45 UTC

I scared when I saw character death. But it's so sweet. I wish death really can be this sweet.

anaka237 October 11 2011, 17:24:25 UTC

<3

thanks for reading :D

tarwen_xoxo October 10 2011, 02:01:49 UTC

i was reading this and looking at their in heaven pic
love the black feather and love the ending line: those who are loved by gods die young

anaka237 October 11 2011, 17:51:05 UTC

thank you :)

I'm glad that you liked it :D

blueplue_hotaru October 10 2011, 11:42:27 UTC

“You didn’t know that those who are loved by gods die young?” Jaejoong said and smiled like he hadn’t done in years…

just. effortlessly perfect.

anaka237 October 11 2011, 17:54:32 UTC

Well, thank you :D

Not so effortlessly, but thak you^^

zoeybunnygals October 11 2011, 04:47:01 UTC

anaka237 October 11 2011, 17:34:44 UTC

thx

allergic_girl October 12 2011, 10:40:37 UTC

oh~ you make the death looks like something to be happy about *moved*

anaka237 October 14 2011, 21:54:20 UTC

I think Yoochun would be happy about it, but I didn't want for him to anticipate his death. ;)

Thanks for reading XD