[Fic] keep the fire going bright

[analineblue]

Title: keep the fire going bright
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Warnings: some language, non-graphic sexual content
Rating: R
Word Count: ~4,100

Summary: The thing about Dean’s deal is that it makes everything feel desperate, like the world is ending, every single second of every day.

Notes: I really love the idea of the boys

Comments

[sammichgirl]

“Shit,” he says. He buries his face in the bend of his elbow for a second and tries to breathe, tries to reel it all back in.

^^^^^this is so S3 for me with Sam. This is how I felt like he was feeling all season long. Not ever really being able to catch his breath because it's too painful, and like he's going to lose control of everything in him and he can't, and shouldn't.

Really loved how you brought them together here, intensely beautiful.

[analineblue]

Aww, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked that part~ That's exactly how I see S3 Sam too, just that low-level panic that he's trying to suppress that never goes away, so I'm really glad that came out here. <3

[rivkat]

I really enjoyed this!

[analineblue]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :)

I really enjoyed this description!

[spocksmentor]

I believe this is the first of your work I have read and it was fabulous! Your description of the two in this circumstance feels spot on. You captured them so well - Hold it together Sam! I will feel warm all day now!

Re: I really enjoyed this description!

[analineblue]

Thanks so much! :) I'm really happy that the characterization and all of that worked for you here.

And yeah, S3 Sam tries so hard to keep it together, but it's not easy! ;_; So I was glad to be able to give him something to be happy about here. ;)

Anyway, thanks so much for reading - I'm really happy you liked this!

[halfshellvenus]

Congrats! Our team has recc'ed you here at crack_impala.

[analineblue]

Well, you've totally made my evening - thank you!! I'm very grateful. ♥

[rivkat]

Congrats! Our team has recced you here at crack_impala.

[analineblue]

Thank you so much for the rec. <3