shitty Haiku from a man who knows

May 14, 2005 16:59

Let's run in bright fields
I'll sing loud songs for you dear
I always saw us

stars at night are bright
gazing down they feel empty
we are bright to them

Allure all around
gripping the sheets i look down
sharp words and heartache

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oh dear tayla5star May 15 2005, 00:20:29 UTC
i dont know what to say.
i feel like i have nothing to say.
and also, i feel like i can't say anything at all.

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mama_jack May 15 2005, 15:55:34 UTC
I do like that haiku.

A lot.

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anarmmmmokay May 15 2005, 21:59:35 UTC
thanks, poetry is a secret passion of mine.
love.

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meinmodell July 14 2005, 01:27:51 UTC

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