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One-Shot - An Education

Nov 25, 2011 07:11

Title: An Education
Author: Andacus
Rating: PG (I guess)
Pairing: Damon/Elena
Notes: Just a little, bitty fic that wrote itself the other day.

( Damon is wrong in all the ways that count and right in all the ways that should. )

fanfic, fic, vd

Comments 19

happyevraftr November 25 2011, 16:26:45 UTC

wow. that was so powerful!! Fantastic writing!!

andacus November 26 2011, 12:22:22 UTC

Awww. <3 Thanks soooo much! That's very kind.

kagome_angel November 25 2011, 16:39:16 UTC

Oh, I love this. Love this. I found myself holding my breath through a couple of lines--it's so beautiful, so poetic. So real and raw and almost painful. I love the relationship between these two and I think you captured it wonderfully. Thank you for sharing. The ending is amazing.

andacus November 26 2011, 12:23:28 UTC

♥ Thank you very much. I was hoping that the sparce nature would come across well. I'm glad you liked.

crimson_kiss17 November 25 2011, 23:13:42 UTC

Silently, with her eyes closed, his lips on her skin, she vows to shoulder her own share.
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Beautiful.

andacus November 26 2011, 12:24:00 UTC

:) Thank you very much!

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andacus November 26 2011, 12:24:21 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

missdk November 26 2011, 03:10:58 UTC

This is absolutely mindblowing in it's simplicity but power. It's very very beautiful. you're an amazing writer, and this piece really showcased your ability at writing imagery and paint a picture with words and symbols.

So so beautiful! Please keep writing and sharing! ;)

andacus November 26 2011, 12:25:36 UTC

Wow! I'm blushing. ♥ Thank you so much for saying this. It's so appreciated.