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Jun 22, 2008 17:19


Title: Absolution
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Donghae/Eeteuk
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2707
Summary: He felt dirty and sick as the sweat beaded and rolled down his body but that's what he felt of himself anyway.
Disclaimer: Here if it's really needed.
Notes: Contains slightly religious themes don't read if this kind of thing offends you easily. ( Read more... )

character: donghae, character: eeteuk, pairing: donghae/eeteuk, fandom: super junior, rating: nc-17

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aneasywayout June 22 2008, 23:15:48 UTC
I wish I could take the credit for the pairing but someone else picked it out when I got a new story idea. ;[ All of my stories I've posted thus far have ended up being with the same 4 characters in various orders though so you may get more of them in the future you never know! ;p

Thanks for reading :)

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SPOT glonk June 23 2008, 00:10:04 UTC
YAY MY PICK :D reading~

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Re: SPOT glonk June 23 2008, 01:17:13 UTC
omg teukhae and angst and you blow me away every time wtf

i felt what dong hae was going through and i felt so bad for him :( and then i was so happy when pixie teuk came to help him out via blowjob and sex

ungh sweaty and angst-ridden haeteuk sex wins in my book obviously

♥ ♥ ♥

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 01:52:09 UTC
Omg that icon what are you doing to me ;_;

Shhhh don't be silly.

I didn't set out for it to have any real plot other than the sweat prompt.. But Donghae alway has a mind of his own when I write him.

You win in my book obviously and so do your comments. ^_^

♥♥♥

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 04:28:52 UTC
I try ;p lol. Thanks for reading doll

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avh8 June 23 2008, 03:05:59 UTC
Oh wow..... thats was amazing! I'm so glad to see one of those rare HaeTeuk smuts ♥ I love the whole concept and it so beautifully written~ you really feel the pain and confusion that Donghae is battling with!
Donghae continued to stare at the wall across from them but he pressed a tender kiss to the side of his best friend's head and squeezed his arms around him a little tighter. He wasn't fixed, he still could hear the voices... T_T
wow! ... just wow! thank you so much ♥ *mems it*

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 04:32:50 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to review. :) This made me smile I appreciate the kind words. ♥

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avh8 June 23 2008, 05:12:09 UTC
it was the least I could do ^^ I really loved this fic!
would love to see more teukhae love ^^

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 05:22:05 UTC
It seems to be a more popular pairing than I initially thought as far as readers go so I just might in the future, you never know!

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nongttaengi June 23 2008, 03:06:36 UTC
Wow, it's not every day I find Donghae/Eeteuk!

I have to say that this fic felt very different from what I normally read (or, I'm pretty sure, what anyone normally reads). Sex is usually a hot thing, with heat and friction and such, but I really like how icy and cold was used instead to contrast Donghae's "Hell." And may I say that it was 115 degrees today, and the mere thought of reading someone else in the heat touching someone else made me all clammy XD lol. But the ice was a really nice balance.

And the whole friendship thing. It's always so nice to read when two people are together that love each other in some way or another. Lust is nice, but the loving kind is so sweet ♥

And for a first AU attempt, this is really good! ♥♥♥

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 05:19:17 UTC
That seems to be the general consensus (sp?) on this pairing I really wish I could take the credit for it now haha.

This comment really left me kind of not knowing what to say for a while, it's one of the nicest I've received tysm for that. I'm glad that someone picked up on the ice and coldness I rather liked that part. I figured if Donghae was in 'hell' than Eeteuk was his angel and would bring relief. Of course in this case it would be cool to ease the burn of his self punishment.

Thanks again for reading, doll! ♥

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nongttaengi June 23 2008, 05:42:17 UTC
Aw, you're welcome! Really, it was such a good fic, it deserved a good comment. I really did enjoy the contrast between the hot and cold. It left an impact, made it that much more...well, I don't want to use 'impact' again, but it really did leave an impression. It's one thing to write something, but it's another to compare it to it's polar opposite in such a way that it's almost felt more than just read. Honestly, I think I'll have to go stalk your journal now!

8D

♥♥♥

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aneasywayout June 23 2008, 05:55:47 UTC
Oh good I've always wanted a stalker of my very own. As long as you're not the chainsaw brandishing type. Though I'll have to warn you most of the stuff here isn't up to par with this fic :\ but still a decent read.

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