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[FIC] Tu eres el Amor de mi Vida - Chapter 12 and Epilogue

Oct 22, 2006 08:55

Title: Tu eres el Amor de Mi Vida
Part: Chapter 12 and the Epilogue
Pairing: Ryan/Colin :)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Resolution, requitance, eh....re-whatever else you want!
Disclaimer: Don't own.

A final thanks to clayangel for the beta.

The epilogue is really quite short, so it's just tacked on at the end of chapter 12.

( 'This is a game for all four contestants. They make up a song in the form of a hoedown, on the spot here, with the assistance of Laura Hall on the piano. So, what shall the hoedown be about?' Clive asked, turning in his seat to look out over the audience. )

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makingamochrie October 22 2006, 15:32:55 UTC

BRAVO!!! Hot, hot, HOT love scene between the two, and it all works out beautifully! Great job, AG! Just wonderful!!

anesthesiagirl October 22 2006, 15:47:40 UTC

thanks. the resolution feels good on my end too. now i can concentrate a bit more on AH. (except for the greg/? fic that's nipping at my heels demanding acknowledgement!)

makingamochrie October 22 2006, 15:49:15 UTC

AH can be whenever, my friend. Do what your heart wants. It always knows. *g* (whispering...colin...do greg/colin...or better yet, greg/clive! Yeah! *g*)

anesthesiagirl October 22 2006, 15:54:51 UTC

well, i'm thinking spin-off from this piece, so greg/colin is decidedly out of the picture......and i just don't think i can do clive justice....otherwise i'd be ALL over it!!!!!

***goes off to watch tv and do a clive character study***

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almostjulie October 22 2006, 18:35:45 UTC

'kay, I'm all caught up on this. Very nice ending! And, yeah, love the use of the Colin hoedown :)

anesthesiagirl October 23 2006, 10:24:22 UTC

thanks so much! i love the colin hoedown, but i can't help but feel like i was cheating......it was just too good not to use!

mochrie_rocks October 22 2006, 18:41:31 UTC

Yay! I love the ending with them sitting on the porch! It was so sweet!

anesthesiagirl October 23 2006, 10:26:02 UTC

aw, thanks! since the writing was so darn spread out, most people probably didn't notice that ryan did paint that scene somewhere back in like chapter 3 when he was reflecting on kissing colin.

its funny, because that vision was actually what spawned the whole story and it was a really long way around to finally get to it!