First post, woo hoo... Hope you all like it..

[blackfriesian]

Kade walked out of her house, pulling on a black and purple beanie, It was one of the only ways to cover them.

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boom, pop, angelic?

[13thchild]

Kade's Eyes glissened with tears, the heat rushing over her whole side, crying help me, she felt a pull, then a push on her side, she passed out conscious, feeling air rushing around her, lifting steady, with a forward arch to a arc, *boom*, *pliff* something just flipped out at each other end of her, a deep booming voice spoke, sante mary angelica, burning in his throat she gasp, yelping, kicking her head back eyes open to the fallen see, heavy light in the air, those sounds, wisping, whiring, steping through air, "what is this" she thought. she'd called, she got a answer, before she could turn to see it was water air, intensely disapeering, almost as if never there, she landed softly in half water on the shore by the water, a soft tap on her head, her jeans tore, her shirt lifted, her hair stuck straight out, electric cascade. *POP* she was out cold, vespa lay beside her, she woke not sure how all this happened, and not sure how she got here. But she would remember in blank spots, her wound seered shut, her arm tingled poping a

[13thchild]

hope it was cool that I added to it, that's what this thing is all about. you write pretty good kade

http://www.livejournal.com/users/kadeity/

[anonymous]

about five years ago i became known as Kaden....kastden of all of Kadeitin.....The almighty powerful Kadeity.

long story...just thought youd like to know alot of my frineds call me Kade instead of my real name.