Under a new sky - a♥r drabble

Jun 23, 2011 23:37

Keep going.

Keep walking.

Keep the children safe.

Fire burned in her abused lungs and aching muscles.  Fear prevented her from slowing down.  Necessity made her push the children further and further away from the gunfire, the screams, and the smoke.

She led them past the safety point and into the shelter of the trees.   The children huddled behind the ( Read more... )

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kastari June 24 2011, 22:45:49 UTC
I can feel the rain & the misery & the fear & shiver myself.

I love how you used this prompt--tying the events on New Caprica back to the events on Kobol.

Very original.

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akachankami June 25 2011, 22:01:03 UTC
how did i miss this??? OMG that's beautiful!
Here, under the rain, she was alive, but this time, afraid she’d never see his face again. i swear, it's 30 degrees (celsius) outside and i shivered O.o
*hugs laura* don't worry, bill would never leave you

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angeltrisha9 June 27 2011, 04:08:25 UTC
Wow! I'm... WOW! thank you! I'm glad it touched something in you! :D

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redrockcan June 27 2011, 00:28:28 UTC
Great work!! I love the original use of the prompt too, very interesting!! I shiver at the imagery, it makes me feel like I'm right there. Great last line and happy it wasn't true!!

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angeltrisha9 June 27 2011, 04:11:56 UTC
Let me just do a happy dance here! *score!* Now. Thank you!!!!

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