untitled ficlet

[angelwen99]

Title: untitled
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Claim: General Series
Characters: Team
Table A Prompt: 38. Threesome
Word Count: 391
Rating: FRC
Summary: Jack really should be used to this by now...
A/N: Many, many thanks to Sylum's Ashliegh/Abby W. for the beta
Disclaimer: Totally don't own them

Comments

[astarte59]

This a great interpretation of the "threesome" theme. I love the way you build up to the implication that this is a matter of great Stargate-ly importance, but instead it's a poker game. Cute! I like the line "Oh well. At least Jack felt assured at his team’s…well, teamwork for lack of a better word." Well-written and right-on characterization. And the last two paragraphs rock, esp. the last line. That seems very Jack, from what little of seen of the series.

I had an idea for a title, but it might remind you too much of the dreaded game of basketball: "Triple-teamed."

Oh, and I'm sorry the proofreader never goes away, but in the paragraph starting with "Looking at Carter's . . . ," you have "Teal" not "Teal'c."

[lt_kitty]

Triple threat? Flushed?

If I knew more about poker, I could give you a better wordplay. Sorry!

Loved it, btw.