Craft Post: The Dreaded Outline

Nov 14, 2011 11:46

A few years ago a story idea struck me. It wasn’t much, just a few images and scenes, some main characters and a one-dimensional conflict. But I fell in love with it. I knew that if I let the idea percolate for a little while it would grow into something rich, romantic, and atmospheric.

So I let it sit. I let it haunt me as more plot points began to ( Read more... )

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sheela_chari November 14 2011, 17:37:43 UTC
Angie, this was so helpful. I'm not a pantser, but I don't outline ahead of time either (I do a little of scribbling here and there, and outline points - to help me stay on course). So this was very fascinating. I found the tips very interesting. I didn't know you could bring in so much craft into an outline. Thank you! Will bookmark this.

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angie_frazier November 14 2011, 18:40:52 UTC
Glad it was something you'll use! I usually start out with just a paragraph or two of ideas, but this took it to a whole new level.

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kimharrington November 14 2011, 18:13:46 UTC
This was fascinating! I had no idea you could include that amount of detail in a submission outline. Dialogue?! This was really eye-opening. Thanks!

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angie_frazier November 14 2011, 18:41:58 UTC
Thanks Kim! I hadn't thought of dialogue either, until my agent suggested it. Including it really made a difference!

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olmue November 14 2011, 18:45:25 UTC
I didn't know you could include dialogue, either! I have no words of wisdom to add, but good luck on your submission!

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angie_frazier November 14 2011, 23:41:33 UTC
Thank you, Rose!

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anonymous November 14 2011, 21:48:58 UTC
Miss Angie--This is exactly what I did with this new book I'm working on. But what I did was fill out the outline according to Hero's Journey and Three Act Structure and 5 Turning Points. That way, my outline wouldn't ramble.

So far, so good!

-Susan

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angie_frazier November 14 2011, 23:42:25 UTC
Rambling is never good for an outline :-)) Nice structure for your outline. I'd love to see a sample sometime!

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patesden November 14 2011, 21:58:23 UTC
Wonderful and helpful post.

I use index cards to outline and start with the turning points, then filling in until I have a very hit or miss affair. I think this technique might help me take my outline to the next level.

Also, thank you for mentioning how long it took you to finish the outline. That makes me feel better.

Good luck. I hope you have good news soon.

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angie_frazier November 14 2011, 23:43:09 UTC
Have I ever mentioned how much I love index cards? Almost as much as I love Post-its. Thanks!

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