First and Last - Chapter 7 (The End)

Mar 13, 2009 00:07

The seventh and final chapter of the fic written for love_is_epic's birthday, after THIS little comment.

Thanks to my partner-in-crime and fabulous betaceltic_flicka, as well as to birthday girl love_is_epic (sorry this is late) and wily_one24 for jump-starting my muse.

First and Last

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first and last, casey gant, fanfiction, veronica mars

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alee23 March 13 2009, 05:44:46 UTC
Aww. That was sweet. It's a shame that the part of them getting together was short (I know it's the last part but I wouldn't mind seeing more, but then I guess I can just wait til you update Anthology for some more Casey/Veronica interaction! ;)) but I do like the build up over the years! Thanks for a great read! ;)

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 05:48:04 UTC
I have been very bad about updating Anthology, but the good news is I have the next chapter almost ready for posting.

And who knows, maybe this story will be deserving of a sequel?

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afrocurl March 13 2009, 07:04:15 UTC
For killing Logan, I should be bad, but there was fun (and slightly wistful) Casey/Veronica, and I can get behind that.

So, nicely done. Also, thanks for not telling me what Logan died of. I don't think I wanted to know.

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 14:21:30 UTC
Yeah, sorry about that, but that was sort of the point of the story.

My beta and I actually discussed adressing why Logan died. I decided not to because:

1. This is really Casey's story, not Logan and Veronica's

2. I never really did decide why he died.

3. This story was already way too long, and past the due date.

Honestly, I like leaving it up in the air. It works with the story. I don't think they would have talked about it much that first day. I've just decided that they discussed it sometime over the following year.

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afrocurl March 13 2009, 16:52:39 UTC
I also shouldn't have tried to type that comment so late. My lord, the be bad should have been be mad. *facepalms*

I agree with your reasons for not including it. I liked it anyway, even if it wasn't for me.

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 20:24:28 UTC
That's okay - I knew what you meant. ; )

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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hildawookie March 13 2009, 07:46:33 UTC
It's bad enough that you killed off Logan, but you also had to go and call him ugly...ruthless! ;)
I did enjoy the ending though. I appreciated that you had them be friends for a year before they made any moves.

Aside from murdering my fav character, this was a very sweet story.

One question: Why was a twelve year old going to a college party?

R.I.P. my pretty little Logan. :(

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 14:36:16 UTC
I didn't call him ugly! I just insinuated that he didn't have classic movie star good looks. Which I don't think he does. I don't think I'd be so attracted to him if he did. What I really love is the lost-little-boy quality that he has...

As for the college party, in my mind Casey's one of the oldest kids in his class (he was already 18 in Drinking the Kool-Aid) which would make him thirteen in the first chapter. I've also decided that he probably looked very mature for his age. Combine that with the fact that he's the heir to an 80 million dollar fortune, and I think he could very easily find his way into a sorority party...

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celtic_flicka March 13 2009, 16:19:02 UTC
Combine that with the fact that he's the heir to an 80 million dollar fortune, and I think he could very easily find his way into a sorority party...

That's what I was thinking when I read it. Also, the fact that Veronica was actually his first kiss made me think that maybe 13-year-old Casey wasn't as smooth as he thought he was. (Which makes him more adorable...)

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 20:27:02 UTC
(Which makes him more adorable...)

Who'd a thought that was possible? ; )

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celtic_flicka March 13 2009, 13:05:40 UTC
I like what you did with the ending!

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angst_driven March 13 2009, 14:38:39 UTC
Yeah, I thought it turned out pretty well myself. ; )

Thanks again for all your help! : )

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celtic_flicka March 13 2009, 16:19:15 UTC
Anytime!!

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wily_one24 March 14 2009, 01:13:53 UTC
Ohhh, man, this was sweet ( ... )

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angst_driven March 14 2009, 02:18:44 UTC
Wow! Such praise! And from the woman who's written (2/3 of - but no pressure) my favorite Casey-fic ever! I'm not worthy! But I'll take it anyway!

You wanna know a secret? The similarities between Jayson and Veronica weren't even planned - I was just trying to think of a scenario that would ensure she'd be out of the picture for the most part. But I like your interpretations better. Makes me sound so much more clever. ; )

And you and Ronda deserve your names at the top for helping me out of my slump. (Seriously, it's been six months since I last posted any fic!) That it made you squee is just an added bonus! : )

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love_is_epic March 14 2009, 03:26:06 UTC
And you and Ronda deserve your names at the top for helping me out of my slump

Awwwwwwwhhhhh, now I feel even more special!

Seriously, I have missed your fic something awful ; )

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angst_driven March 15 2009, 04:49:18 UTC
That's 'cuz you are special. : )

Now, do you want to write my thesis so I can concentrate on writing fanfic? Pretty please? *bats eyelashes* Nope? Didn't think so. Oh well. ; P

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