Week 3 Topic

[aniron_iorhael]

A storm rumbled behind me and I had no idea. It was at my heels before I had time to even turn around. Why? Because I was deaf and dumb -- an infant in a body that demanded me to be more academic. They wanted quantum physics when all I could do was wail with a scrunched up face. I couldn’t open my eyes, and I didn’t want to. Who cared about the

Comments

[penpusher]

I'm always a fan of poetry masquerading as prose.

I really like what you're showing here, and also what you're choosing to keep concealed. After all the best offense can sometimes be a good defense.

[aniron_iorhael]

Thanks for reading! Yeah, it was certainly difficult and kind of just formed itself, in a way. I do have a lot to get out but, I think in little snippets here and there is best.

[halfshellvenus]

I like that this could either be a nightmare, or an abstraction of how reality feels when everyone behaves like an enemy and it all seems too much. Until you decide to push back.

[dmousey]

Intense! I'd like to hear this read aloud. Hugs and peace~~~D

[bewize]

It really did read like a performance piece! Well done.

[aniron_iorhael]

Thank you! Yeah, I never considered open-word poetry or anything but ... I'm glad the piece reminds others of different things. It's interesting. Thanks for reading!

[murielle]

Kudos! Well done!

[sinnamongirl]

Whoa, super intense! Excellent work :)