LJ Idol Week 6

[aniron_iorhael]

The music played though I was unaware of it. I was part of a dance and I was unaware of that, too. As you stepped, I stepped, as you moved, I moved, turning and spinning as everything else spiraled downward into unbeknownst chaos. I was completely oblivious to the whole thing as you held me close, to better move and sway across the floor, or so I

Comments

[eternal_ot]

You packed a punch in there! Lovely work! you use your words wisely :) it paints a picture in the mind. Kudos!

[aniron_iorhael]

Thank you! To be honest, I wasn't too sure about this vignette, it didn't seem as fluid with the words as I wanted it to be, as it would've been years ago ... but thank you for reading. :)

[morettaallstar]

Small but effective! Excellently put together.

[aniron_iorhael]

Thank you for reading. :) I certainly wanted to make it a bit longer and more in-depth with things but, I didn't know how to go about it, unfortunately.

[bleodswean]

A great analogy!

[aniron_iorhael]

Thank you and thanks for reading!

[dee_aar2]

I loved this the first time and then I took a re-read. Loved it even then.

I refuse to dance with ghosts. Powerful.

[dmousey]

This is hauntingly beautiful. I like how you painted the scene and it was very fluid. I enjoyed this. Hugs and peace~~~