LJ Idol Week 6

[aniron_iorhael]

The music played though I was unaware of it. I was part of a dance and I was unaware of that, too. As you stepped, I stepped, as you moved, I moved, turning and spinning as everything else spiraled downward into unbeknownst chaos. I was completely oblivious to the whole thing as you held me close, to better move and sway across the floor, or so I

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

I love the line, "I refuse to dance with ghosts." Very powerful.

[bewize]

Lovely imagery.

[my_name_is_jenn]

Lovely. ♥

[roina_arwen]

I like the way your wound the topic into the story, making it seem like a simple take on the topic before twisting it around. Nice job!

[halfshellvenus]

I really liked this as an abstraction of someone finding themselves in an abusive, controlling relationship. All the parallels were there, but using different language.

[aniron_iorhael]

And difficult to forget long after the fact. Thanks for reading!