LJ Idol Week 6

Jan 24, 2017 17:28

The music played though I was unaware of it. I was part of a dance and I was unaware of that, too. As you stepped, I stepped, as you moved, I moved, turning and spinning as everything else spiraled downward into unbeknownst chaos. I was completely oblivious to the whole thing as you held me close, to better move and sway across the floor, or so I ( Read more... )

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ellison January 27 2017, 19:01:48 UTC
I liked this - very creative metaphor!

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devilz_workshop January 27 2017, 20:35:30 UTC
Well this was indeed a treat to read. Beautifully crafted.

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penpusher January 28 2017, 00:11:25 UTC
It's all about perspective and how two different people can see the very same thing in completely different ways and how they can use that view as a method of reacting differently. Good thoughts.

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