Week 7 Topic

Jan 31, 2017 17:45

Light streamed in from windows lining a never-ending hallway; it was dark otherwise, an impenetrable darkness that was not malicious, but held secrets waiting to be discovered. A hand fingered along the walls, trailing along the smooth side. Stepping into the glow, a face peered into the window. The light intensified into a vivid recollection, ( Read more... )

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dmousey February 1 2017, 06:09:09 UTC
This is deep! I realy want to sink my teeth and mind into this again when it's not 1 o'clock in the morning. And I'll leave a better comment then. Hugs and peace~~~

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eternal_ot February 1 2017, 08:03:13 UTC
Wow! I enjoyed this journey. Magical realism! Good job!

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kajel February 1 2017, 13:51:16 UTC
What a beautiful progression backwards into childhood to find that one spot of innocence and happiness.

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suesniffsglue February 1 2017, 15:03:48 UTC
A reminder we could all use sometimes. Thanks for providing it :) Very nicely done

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beeker121 February 1 2017, 23:37:56 UTC
A door back to herself, what a gift. I love this line "There were good days and bad days and all the nights were monstrous." It goes from cliche to evocative in a breath.

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