Comments | annabirmingham: Friday at the sandbox - Part 3 "two halves make a whole"

annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 3 "two halves make a whole"

Jun 28, 2011 20:44

Part 3 of the story that was meant to be just a one-shot...

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground... I am currently a stay-at-home-mom so this scenario is based on a setting I know all too well :)

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

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fridayatthesandbox

Comments 43

fl1789 June 29 2011, 01:00:36 UTC

This is so sweet :)
And Jack is so good at flirting! The best,actually.He should be teaching courses about it.

chapter 4 is on the works,right? ;DD

hugs,

fl.

annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:40:49 UTC

Thanks! yes, there will be a chapter 4 at some point :)
I'd take flirting lessons from Jack anytime...
Anna x

interplay joetheone June 29 2011, 02:05:35 UTC

I love the interplay between these two they are wonderful and happy and so loving. Joe

Re: interplay annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:41:02 UTC

Thanks Joe. Glad you are reading!
Anna x

trekfan June 29 2011, 02:20:23 UTC

aw JACK I love you! you're being so subtle. The slow approach definitely applies here.

I haven't had an old fashioned donut in ages.

I like chocolate covered with sprinkles.

more please
Hugs

annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:41:23 UTC

Thanks Linda - more soon!
Anna x

gwylliondream June 29 2011, 03:31:56 UTC

This is just lovely! So glad you are continuing the nice slow burn.

XO
Donna

annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:41:47 UTC

Yeah, I do love me a slow burn :)
Thanks Donna!
Anna x

rimasworld June 29 2011, 04:38:53 UTC

I'm really enjoying this!

annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:42:00 UTC

Thanks for reading!
Anna x