Friday at the sandbox - Part 3 "two halves make a whole"

Jun 28, 2011 20:44

Part 3 of the story that was meant to be just a one-shot...

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground... I am currently a stay-at-home-mom so this scenario is based on a setting I know all too well :)

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

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emmiska June 29 2011, 04:45:53 UTC
I don't know which is sweeter here, Jack or the donut. Thanks for the continuation!

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:42:25 UTC
Thanks very much for continuing to read!
Anna x

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uli1 June 29 2011, 05:51:25 UTC
LOL, this still doesn't look like the end of it!!

Okay, it looks like Ennis is divorced already... Jack, go in for the kill!! :D :D :D

It continues to be really sweet! And I love to have something like this for breakfast... :D

I am looking forward to the next little breakfast treat!

Uli

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:43:21 UTC
Thanks Uli - happy to help make breakfast a little sweeter for you!
And yes.. there will be a bit more of this :)
Anna x

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roby100 June 29 2011, 06:46:03 UTC
Jack is a master in the flirting art!
The story is adorable and I love it so much; well, it always happens with your stories :)
Thanks for the new chapter.
A big hug
Roby

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:44:46 UTC
Aw, thanks Roby - am so glad you are enjoying it!
Anna x

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:46:14 UTC
Oh I did post just for you - of course :)
I think little voices might just be about to interrupt the goings on here. Kids have seriously bad timing!!
Thanks for reading!
Anna x

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 08:39:23 UTC
LOL! that'll teach me to read comments a bit better!! Oops... :)

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aileenfan June 29 2011, 07:36:53 UTC
Aww, this is a sweet story:) Keep writing, please:)

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annabirmingham July 1 2011, 01:46:27 UTC
Thanks - and I will!
Anna x

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