Friday at the sandbox - Part 4 "blood, sweat and tears"

Jul 06, 2011 14:37

Part 4 of the ongoing one-shot...

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - a little blood in this one. Nothing serious, so hopefully not too squicky!
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack has just introduced himself to the father of the little blonde girl...

clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

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trekfan July 6 2011, 19:36:32 UTC
I love these Drabbles, Anna. poor Jack and Bobby. I thought Ennis might come over and see if Bobby is okay. Jack should definitely get a new first Aid kit

more please

Hugs
Linda

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roby100 July 6 2011, 21:42:11 UTC
Lovely, sweet and beautiful.
I loved that Jack's priority is of course his son, I loved Jack watching Ennis drinking his latte and being happy to see Ennis watching him, I loved Bobby's words: they are just moments but they filled my heart with happiness and I would like to read about these guys and their kids forever.
Thanks for the update.
A big hug
Roby

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annabuffy July 7 2011, 01:26:01 UTC
Aw, very cute. Bobby's injury may have cut the date short, but at least Jack knows that Ennis is interested in him. Looking forward to the next latte and desert date.

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bbmgirlfan July 7 2011, 02:11:23 UTC
Very cute!

Jeanine

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fun joetheone July 7 2011, 02:36:12 UTC
I like how he hits Bobby up to find out Juniors dad name and well it was just too fun. Joe

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