Comments | annabirmingham: Friday at the sandbox - Part 19 "Deep, deeper, deepest"

annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 19 "Deep, deeper, deepest"

Oct 12, 2011 15:06

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

The boys have a date with some meat...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Comments 41

sliveredmoon October 12 2011, 23:14:56 UTC

Another sweet episode.
I'm getting like Jack...I'm impatient for more! : )
So this was Friday night right? Does this mean neither one has to deal with kids tomorrow morning? Cause maybe Jack'll get a sleepover invite. That would be really cool...

annabirmingham October 13 2011, 02:31:55 UTC

Yep, young Bobby is away so the boys can play :)
Thanks for reading!
Anna x

annabuffy October 13 2011, 01:02:49 UTC

Mmm, Ennis may have passed on dessert at the restaurant, but seems like Jack might give Ennis some whipped cream dreams instead. (I just can't resist. Something about your story just brings it out of me.) The boys are cute when they act so smitten.

annabirmingham October 13 2011, 02:34:21 UTC

LOL! I love seeing what you come up with. I had some nice dessert tonight (we went out for dinner) but no whipped cream for me :)
More soon!
Anna

mystery joetheone October 13 2011, 01:36:17 UTC

The texting is a good lead to something else that is up but you can sure feel the magic between them. Joe

Re: mystery annabirmingham October 13 2011, 02:35:01 UTC

Thanks Joe. Ennis was doing something with his phone - but not necessarily texting :)
Anna x

janettexx October 13 2011, 02:17:45 UTC

Wow! I can't believe they made it through that dinner without attacking each other at the table or at least having a quickie in the bathroom, your right though, prolonging the moment makes it much more exciting! can't wait for more.
Thanks
Janette.

annabirmingham October 13 2011, 02:37:39 UTC

Thanks Janette. Although they have major passion, they are (apparently) old enough to control themselves in public - sadly :)
Anna x

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annabirmingham October 13 2011, 03:06:32 UTC

i guess it could be embarrassing if you got caught by a cop - and the cop was younger than you :)
Thanks for reading!
Anna x

Sorry for treadjacking! lightning070 October 13 2011, 15:59:51 UTC

"i guess it could be embarrassing if you got caught by a cop - and the cop was younger than you :)"
That response actually made me laugh! Nice one!

Re: Sorry for treadjacking! annabirmingham October 14 2011, 13:20:28 UTC

Oh please - thread jack all you like!!