Comments | annabirmingham: Friday at the sandbox - Part 19 "Deep, deeper, deepest"

annabirmingham

Friday at the sandbox - Part 19 "Deep, deeper, deepest"

Oct 12, 2011 15:06

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c450 words
Feedback - yes please!

The boys have a date with some meat...

( clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Comments 41

gwylliondream October 13 2011, 02:53:19 UTC

Whoohoo! I love it that they can't keep their hands off each other!

XO
Donna

annabirmingham October 13 2011, 03:07:22 UTC

Can't beat a nice bit of lust, huh?
Thanks Donna!
Anna x

roby100 October 13 2011, 06:34:31 UTC

I feel my chest expand and know that I have fallen.
Awwww! This is a very important step. I'm glad for him. Maybe Ennis feels the same.... :)

I feel my chest expand and know that I have fallen.
My feelings for this story from chapter 1.

Thanks for the update.
A big hug
Roby

annabirmingham October 14 2011, 13:21:33 UTC

Thanks Roby!
Yes it is a big step. Jack knows he is in love and we can only hope that Ennis feels the same. This is definitely your kind of story so I think you know what the answer will be :)
Anna x

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annabirmingham October 14 2011, 13:28:23 UTC

Oh yes, dessert is definitely on the horizon :)
I don't think there'll be much - if any - conflict in this story as I can't get my head around complications at the moment!! It was meant to be short and sweet, so perhaps it'll just be long and sweet instead.
Thanks!
Anna x

Friday at the sandbox argentine65 October 13 2011, 11:12:46 UTC

It is not only Jack that have fallen, Ennis too. And I love the necking. Thank you very much. Martha

Re: Friday at the sandbox annabirmingham October 14 2011, 13:29:12 UTC

Thanks Martha. Yes I think Ennis has fallen too, but it will probably take him a bit longer to realise it - and to tell Jack!
Anna x

lightning070 October 13 2011, 15:57:17 UTC

There is some interesting lines in here.
I wonder what Ennis looked at in his phone? Interesting twist there!
The line about having sex in the car was undignified for their age made me smile. Jack acts almost like a teenager-in-love around Ennis! Good on Ennis for stopping him.
I'm pretty sure about what they'll do all night long... ;)

Great story! Can't wait for the next installment!

annabirmingham October 14 2011, 13:32:43 UTC

Thanks so much!
I love that the phone has generated so much interest - I know what Ennis was doing (of course!) so it'll be fun to reveal it at some point :)
More soon!
Anna x