i'm going to have to think about this and roll it around a few times in my head because i thought this piece was absolutely gorgeous and beautifully written and i just yeah it was enjoyable
Omg I didn't read the character death's warning ;; (I should have known with the beginning but..yeah) I loved it nonetheless but...my heart...
Little does Sehun know that he was about to hear the one truth Jongin's ever told. He doesn't even know that that's the last time he'll ever see him.
J-Jongiiiiin ;; Can you hear the sound of my heart shattering into pieces...
Sehun cares, but it was too little too late, and so when he gets the call about Jongin being shot at work the day after it happens, it's weird and tragic, but he doesn't cry.
I didn't know what to feel at the end. This is just so so sad.
(I thought it would have a happy ending and somehow Jongin would get his shit together or something with sehun's help but- *ugly sobbing*)
i ... i can't. my thoughts, where are my thoughts.
this is so beautiful. i'm just. i. bluh. character death. it's supposed to be sad but instead i'm astounded by the beauty omg i'm crying beautified-by-fic tears.
i stumbled onto this by accident (i was looking for taoris my otp is dead) and i'm such a sucker for bottom kai (except when tao's involved) and i got sucked in and i. do not. regret. punctuations are necessary for emphasis.
this is wonderful and i'm still sitting here thinking about it when i'm supposed to be sleeping right now okay and um i don't think you remember me i used to be pandragonriyong in the shinee fandom i recognized your new username and maybe that's another reason that drew me in to read this fic which i still. do not. regret.
this is my first comment to any fic ever in this journal and i should really change that but. wow. i just. i wasn't even going to comment at first because it's waaaaaaay past sleeping hours and i'm high as fuck but. BUT. BUT. this is so pretty i'm saving this and reading it forever
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AND YES I REMEMBER YOU OMG HI i loved your shinee fics :''') are you in the exo fandom now then?? i'm so flattered i got your first comment heh n_____n
this is a masterpiece every single line every word every thing, this is perfection i want to rip my heart out just so it will stop hurting inside my body jesus christ this is so so so so. so. good. your writing style is the kind i spend my life searching for i can't even tell you. the way that the voice that comes thru your writing is detached and crude but the derisive casualness is nothing but a thin film covering up all this heartwrenching pain underneath this is everything to me i want to TELL YOU about how i fell into raptures over so many lines but oh my god literally every paragraph is golden how do i
He feels the gag around his member, and only lets Jongin up when he's sure there isn't a drop left to spill onto his already dirty sheets. Jongin is dirtier than his sheets, so it's better off in him.
christ almighty this is absolutely awful i love it but it's so fucked UP
"For fuck's sake," he mutters, looking away. Jongin is so ridiculous. He's such a caricature. Such a stereotype. Such a fucking whore and a lying bitch and
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omggg thank you so much!! ;_____; your comment is so nice ahhh T T
i did feel really bad for jongin and that i killed him and all OTL didn't think it'd come out this sad though ahah
ohh what dynamics and tropes with then do you tend to avoid?? screams omg you're too nice thank you for reading i definitely accept your heart pls accept my kisses!! :** (tries to make up for the heartache)
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and roll it around a few times in my head
because i thought this piece was absolutely gorgeous and beautifully written
and i just
yeah
it was enjoyable
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but it's really well written. ;_;
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sorry about the character death haha ;;
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I loved it nonetheless but...my heart...
Little does Sehun know that he was about to hear the one truth Jongin's ever told. He doesn't even know that that's the last time he'll ever see him.
J-Jongiiiiin ;;
Can you hear the sound of my heart shattering into pieces...
Sehun cares, but it was too little too late, and so when he gets the call about Jongin being shot at work the day after it happens, it's weird and tragic, but he doesn't cry.
I didn't know what to feel at the end. This is just so so sad.
(I thought it would have a happy ending and somehow Jongin would get his shit together or something with sehun's help but- *ugly sobbing*)
Thank you :)
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this is so beautiful. i'm just. i. bluh. character death. it's supposed to be sad but instead i'm astounded by the beauty omg i'm crying beautified-by-fic tears.
i stumbled onto this by accident (i was looking for taoris my otp is dead) and i'm such a sucker for bottom kai (except when tao's involved) and i got sucked in and i. do not. regret. punctuations are necessary for emphasis.
this is wonderful and i'm still sitting here thinking about it when i'm supposed to be sleeping right now okay and um i don't think you remember me i used to be pandragonriyong in the shinee fandom i recognized your new username and maybe that's another reason that drew me in to read this fic which i still. do not. regret.
this is my first comment to any fic ever in this journal and i should really change that but. wow. i just. i wasn't even going to comment at first because it's waaaaaaay past sleeping hours and i'm high as fuck but. BUT. BUT. this is so pretty i'm saving this and reading it forever ( ... )
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i hope you took back some of that sleep!!
AND YES I REMEMBER YOU OMG HI i loved your shinee fics :''') are you in the exo fandom now then?? i'm so flattered i got your first comment heh n_____n
thank you so much again ahhh
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well i gravitated towards the tvxq fandom and tried to stay there, but then exo was too strong so i gave up. and now i'm here ;;
no problem<3
i wanted to add you as a friend but i didn't in case you didn't remember me. BUT YOU DID SO YAY<333 \(;u;)/
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lol yeah exo got to everyone lmao
n______n <3
oh btw if you have time please do write some bottom!jongin haha there's a severe lack of it!!
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this is so so so so. so. good. your writing style is the kind i spend my life searching for i can't even tell you. the way that the voice that comes thru your writing is detached and crude but the derisive casualness is nothing but a thin film covering up all this heartwrenching pain underneath this is everything to me
i want to TELL YOU about how i fell into raptures over so many lines but oh my god literally every paragraph is golden how do i
He feels the gag around his member, and only lets Jongin up when he's sure there isn't a drop left to spill onto his already dirty sheets. Jongin is dirtier than his sheets, so it's better off in him.
christ almighty this is absolutely awful i love it but it's so fucked UP
"For fuck's sake," he mutters, looking away. Jongin is so ridiculous. He's such a caricature. Such a stereotype. Such a fucking whore and a lying bitch and ( ... )
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i did feel really bad for jongin and that i killed him and all OTL didn't think it'd come out this sad though ahah
ohh what dynamics and tropes with then do you tend to avoid?? screams omg you're too nice thank you for reading i definitely accept your heart pls accept my kisses!! :** (tries to make up for the heartache)
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