kirsch (a short fic)

[anne_jumps]

I initially wrote this last night just on a light whim, recalling the story in Parachute Infantry about the bottle of kirsch, but today I've been obsessed with this song and it's lent this a darker cast (even if the song is about Judas and Jesus and even if it doesn't totally fit....)

You lead me on with those innocent eyes

Comments

[daisukikawaii]

Oh god, this is so amazing. This was so hot. Actually hotter than anything I have read lately. You have a talent for building tension in your words.<3
KEEP DOING THIS.

[anne_jumps]

Oh god thank you so much. XD You have no idea how much I appreciate that comment.

[daisukikawaii]

WIe, hope it made you happy.
This fic certainly made me all happy and fluffy on the inside. Jeez. This really got me shipping Lieb and Web for real.

[anne_jumps]

Hee! Excellent. It's funny, they run the gamut from mean to super angsty to fluffy and happy.

[teaspoonery]

;algdkfj ♥

He made a soft lost sound, not the one he was expecting to make, and curled his fingers tightly in the rough cotton of Joe's shirt, shifting beneath him.

THAT. I don't know, but for some reason I briefly thought I could smell it (wtf, self?). ♥

[anne_jumps]

Ahahaha. Does it smell like kirsch and cigarettes? XD

[teaspoonery]

Definitely! And something sweaty/musty I'll call Joe.

[waxing_gibbous]

This was lovely! I adored the simple quietness of the moment. (But, it's never quite so simple, when Liebgott's involved, is it?) I loved the fact that Webster takes the time to write, even in the middle of the war. That seemed so in character, somehow. And I loved that Lieb actually does care, deep down, whether Web's writing & wants to know if he's in it. Great job! You managed to say an awful lot in just a few words!

[anne_jumps]

Thank you!

Yeah, Webster apparently did write as often as possible. I mean, in order to have written a book like that, he'd have had to.

I enjoy the fact that when Liebgott says he didn't really think about it, he's clearly lying (as evinced by the fact that he looks away, lol).

[warpedsexuality]

How did you do that? I don't think any other fic of whatever length has ever evoked both these characters more vividly in my mind's eye.

It made me gleefully happy - thank you!

[anne_jumps]

Oh my goodness, thank you so much <3

[medicmarina]

Oh my, oh me...
That was lovely <3

[anne_jumps]

Thanks!