HP Fic: Hog's Head, Snape/Lupin NC-17

[anneline]

Title: Hog's Head
Characters: Lupin/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine
Summary: Snape and Lupin at the Hog's Head Inn
Warnings: A little angst, some silliness, and lots of sex
Betas: regan_v, ion_bond, sor_bet -- Thank y'all.

Comments

[snapetoy]

I really liked this. I particularly liked the long history of the relationship between them, and the way you showed that to us. I loved the tension and the reality of it. Thank you!

[anneline]

Thank-you. I'm glad you liked it. You should thank sor_bet for insisting I make it clearer they had a history and flesh out the back-story a bit.

[busaikko]

Lovely story. The characters are so very very canon, but yet their interaction is truly believable--terrifically hard to do, yet you carried it off with ease and made it funny and painful by turns. * much love *

[anneline]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I sometimes worry that I'm more attached to my jokes than to the characters and sacrifice canon for humor.

[busaikko]

Canon is all about making sacrifices with plot and characters for jokes! (What parent in a world with Greyback in it would give a kid a 'bite me quick!' name like Remus Lupin?) busaikko is all for irreverence in the name of a good story! (^-^)

[etrangere]

That was really awesome. Hot and deep and very wll charactrized. I love the fact you made it fit into that time period.

[anneline]

Thank-you. I love squeezing stories into different parts of canon. I'm pretty convinced that while Harry was having all his adventures in the different books, everyone else was having hot, gay sex. That's how my mind works. It's sad, really.

[lizardspots]

!!!

This was brilliant! It's light hearted and fun, yet you manage to convey so many layers to their relationship - and you don't make them pretty, I love that! Remus' back hurting, and you don't shy away from Snape's ugliness.

Bravo. :D!!

[anneline]

Thanks. I'm afraid I might have gotten too graphic and ugly with this fic but I'm glad it works. I figure if people read Snape slash they've got a kink for ugly snarky guys just like I do.

[apythia]

Nicely done! It's a great portrayal of a real sexual encounter and it's amazing how much of a deep sense of past you gave them together in such a short amount of time. I enjoyed it.

[anneline]

Thank-you. I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure how much of a history they were going to have in this fic, but the conversations came out so familiar and comfortable that I decided to give them a more established relationship.