HP Challenge Fic: Sharing, Snape/Lupin/Black NC-17

[anneline]

Title: Sharing
Characters: Lupin/Snape/Black
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine
Summary: Severus doesn't like sharing.
Warnings: Angst, three in a bed.
Beta: sor_bet
A/N: aylaranzz provided the following prompt.. "Severus & Remus are secretly together during OotP. It's been weeks since they've last seen each other and Sirius finds them in a compromising position

Comments

[anneline]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked. I love writing angsty threesomes.

[latticelight]

Entirely agreed--you've said everything I could imagine saying about this fic.

[anneline]

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[aylaranzz]

I really enjoyed this. The first person point of view worked really well. Remus' thoughts and emotions wouldn't have come across quite the same way if it were in third. All of the flashbacks and things were a very nice touch as well. Remus is quite sneaky isn't he. lol. Very nicely done.

[anneline]

Great! I'm glad you enjoyed this since it was written for you challenge. I was afraid it might be angstier than you wanted. This was a very different dynamic than I usually write for these guys, it was very fun to do.

[jedirita]

Whoa. Very awesome.

I liked the way you zipped backward and forward in time. And Lupin choosing Snape, but knowing he had to stay with Sirius.

Favorite lines:

"You think I'm fucking Buckbeak."

Mwahaha! Remus being intentionally dense.

"Those teeth, they're not natural," he said. "Teeth like an American."

So true.

"No. No. I trust Sirius, completely."

"Well, then, you're an idiot."

Yeah well, I'd have to agree with Snape, there.

"I choose you," I said quietly. "But I'm staying here."

Ow. Just -- ow.

[anneline]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure about the "teeth like an American" bit, It's good to know it works for someone else besides just me.

[karasu_hime]

Oh, ooh....I'm at a lost of words.

It's like they would go in circles never breaking this cycle.
I feel so sad for all of them.

You made me feel bad for Sirius, he was so real here. And Remus I can so see him this way.

This was definatley a hurts but a really good read. Your writing is beautiful.

[anneline]

Thank-you for the sweet comments. Yeah, I love a good angsty love triangle, and people trapped in dysfunctional cycles.

[ollopa]

this was utterly fantastic. i loved the softly rocking gray feeling of everything, punctuated by those brief flashes of color. it always amazes me when an author can manipulate multiple currents of feeling and consciousness like that. awesome, awesome job.

[anneline]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The tenses were a bit tough in this with all the jumping around but it was fun to write.