Comments | anneline: HP Challenge Fic: Sharing, Snape/Lupin/Black NC-17

anneline

HP Challenge Fic: Sharing, Snape/Lupin/Black NC-17

Apr 24, 2006 17:07

Title: Sharing
Characters: Lupin/Snape/Black
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine
Summary: Severus doesn't like sharing.
Warnings: Angst, three in a bed.
Beta: sor_bet
A/N: aylaranzz provided the following prompt.. "Severus & Remus are secretly together during OotP. It's been weeks since they've last seen each other and Sirius finds them in a compromising position ( Read more... )

Comments 43

summerborn April 25 2006, 15:18:53 UTC

Very enjoyable. It's a slightly different take on characterization than one usually sees, and I think it works perfectly. Very nicely done! Especially Sirius, gah. No, wait, especially Snape. Okay, never mind the "especially" :)

anneline April 25 2006, 18:39:56 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and like the boys, too. This is a very different dynamic than I've ever written in my previous Snupin. It was fun to try approaching the relationships from another angle.

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anneline April 25 2006, 18:45:31 UTC

Yeah, I think the story's open-ended as to whether Snape comes back or not, that way the reader can decide. We know canon's also about to throw some bad stuff their way. I hope they can overcome it; Severus is definitely desperate for Remus.

steph_annie2000 April 25 2006, 16:51:00 UTC

This is like my dream fic. Sirius/Remus/Severus threesome angst, and brillantly written too. Fantastic

anneline April 25 2006, 18:49:20 UTC

Thanks! It was fun to write. It's hard to get Snape and Black into bed together even with Lupin there as bait, but, boy, is it worth it. I think all angry, dysfunctional love triangles should end in a 3way.

sor_bet April 28 2006, 04:01:20 UTC

I love this reply. "Even with Lupin there as bait". That makes me want to read more S/S/R fics, but probably only if you write them. Really, it's just a gem.

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Re: Ouch! anneline April 25 2006, 18:52:34 UTC

Hee! Thanks. Sorry about all the pain.

A friend of mine was talking about how she sucked her hair as a girl and I just got this image of baby!Snape sucking his hair. It was the most adorable thing, I had to use it in a fic.

I'm glad you liked the teeth bit, I wasn't sure about that, I almost took it out.

amorettea April 26 2006, 01:52:05 UTC

Excellent. I always admire a good ending and the ending of this story was perfect. You have Lupin's voice perfectly and the sorrow and pain in his lovers shines through. Wonderfully, tragically, brilliant.

Amorette

anneline April 26 2006, 14:33:15 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's good to know that Lupin's voice sounds all right, I was worried about putting it in the first person.