Poetry Challenge Fic: Immemorial, Sirius/Remus Rated R

[anneline]

Title: Immemorial
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: R for slash.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Sirius and Remus and a progression of autumns.
A/N: This was written in response to the hp_literotica Poetry line challenge.
Thanks to summerborn for the beta.

The leaves, they were withering and sere

Comments

[anneline]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Since the prompt was Poe, I was going to do something with ghosts or Inferi but I couldn't come up with anything. In the end, I decided most of Poe's ghost stories are really just about missing someone very much, so I wrote this.

[anneline]

Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it. I've been writing a lot of sad stuff lately. I've got to try something fluffy soon.

[exiled_mind]

Oh, you won my everlasting adorations (and tears!)

rise and fall

And that just killed me. I love the progression of your scenes, and the way you craft your sentences really strikes me. Definitely going into my mems.

[anneline]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked this. It's a little more "poetical" than I usually write, so I'm a bit nervous about it.

[anneline]

Thanks, I'm a sucker for sad stories and this sad, doomed pairing.

[aillil]

Here via hp_literotica's masterlist.

The first part was sweet. Their conversation with the "Do you want to see mine?" was so boyish, so typically teenage that I grinned like an idiot.
The second part brought me down again, of course.
Third part, now, another smile and chuckling. Awkward first times are just too awesome between those two. I love how easy they're with each other.
Fourth part, ouch, back down to floor. The fifth part is vaguely creepy for some reason.

Lovely work. :)

[anneline]

Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it. It did come out something like a roller-coaster ride. I enjoyed writing the teenage boy stuff the best.