Hawaii Five-O fic; Riding the Odds

[annieke]

Author: annieke
Title: Riding the Odds
Rating: R
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Warnings: none
Word Count: 5400+
Summary: Danny contemplates the odds with Steve.

Notes:
Written for Day 16 for Fannish Advent here
Coda to 3.09
This picks up just at the end of that episode.

Also at AO3 here

Comments

[kcs_slayve]

Danny wants Steve's love.

What are his odds?

[annieke]

I think they're looking pretty good, actually... ;)

[smudgegirl]

I think his odds are 100% ....great story thanks

[annieke]

I think so, too...
and thanks for reading!

[superbadgirl]

Yup, still like this story. Steve being jealous. Danny being Danny. Grace inserting little childish tidbits that have double meaning she can't possibly get.

And the hot, funny end, of course. :)

[annieke]

Hey, thanks! For saying...and for saving me from italicizing the entire thing which was so going to happen.
Grace, yeah. One day she'll offer up that same comment with a wink and a smile, happy to know her dad is happy. with Steve, of course!

[thegrrrl2002]

This is such an utter delight, the way they are playing with each other, needling one another, and never stopping even when naked, because this is what they do. And yet there's so much affection and love. I love it!

Also, poor Danny, looking Grace with all the makeup on and being traumatized by it. Oh, Danny. :D

[annieke]

Glad you liked-I was so hoping someone would :)
They do have so much affection and love for one another, and it's just too fun to play with them, letting them play with each other, hee.
Thanks so much!

[kitmerlot1213]

I think the odds will always be in Danny's favor--it's just that Danny needs to be reminded of that fact. And it doesn't help that even though Steve is obviously jealous, he doesn't admit his true feelings.

These two knuckleheads need an intervention :)

I also liked how adorable Grace is in this and a little part of me enjoyed Danny's not taking Rachel's crap--although I do want them to become friends eventually.

Lovely work on this :)

[annieke]

Definitely need an intervention. I'd like to be there for it :)
Glad you like my Grace, too! thanks so much for this!