Fic: You Commandeered My Heart (1/?) (SPN, Dean/Castiel, PG)

[anoradh]

Title: You Commandeered My Heart (1/?) - An Officer And A Pirate
Author: anoradh
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Genre: Pirate!AU, romance
Warnings: Bad Harlequinesque writing, probable factual errors, intentionally stupid plot
Spoilers: None, I think
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Author's Notes: I was playing Sid Meier’s Pirates! and dancing with the “beautiful”

Comments

[direbanshee]

Don't you dare stop! I cut my proverbial teeth on Harlequin historical romances so this is a lovely treat for me, I mean, who doesn't love a pirate story? As for how to continue, I'll have to throw in my vote for number three. I can see Dean being his charming snarky self to hide just how concerned he is to be at his enemies' mercy and Cas and Sam butting heads on how to go about the rescue before Ellen and/or Bobby tells them to get their heads out of their asses... wow, long review is long :)
Also, this so makes me want to make arts, you have no idea. I've got a thing for historical outfits.

[anoradh]

Long review is lovely! Thank you very much! Pirate stories are fun, aren't they? Not as easy to write as I had hoped, however, although that may be because I need to brush up on my Harlequin-stories. ;-) Thanks for the advice! This is absolutely brilliant and giving me so many ideas.

[whomii2]

i was leaning toward 1, because i thought it would get Cas and Dean together on the Impala (and Cas could go on the rescue mission against orders, so he gives up his commision and can stay on the Impala). Although i suppose you could have a similar scenario where Cas goes against orders to help rescue Dean (although without Dean there it seems less like the crew would accept Cas, unless he had vital intellegence or something they needed --map to the jail, or being the only one that speaks Spanish?). So i guess any scenario that ends with a plausible reason for Cas to be hanging out on Dean's boat would work

[anoradh]

Oh, I definitely agree! If Cas isn't the one being kidnapped, he definitely needs to go on The Impala. And get kicked out of the navy, because he's a rebel (I have to stay somewhat true to canon, don't I?). Thanks for your ideas! They're very helpful!

[iryann]

YES, it is very much worth continuing. So please don't abandon it, I love it already!

As for the plot.......I like option 2. But I feel like number 3 would be interesting also :3

If you need any help with Spanish terms, I can help! (is a spaniard) lol

[anoradh]

Thanks for the offer! I may take you up to it. My Spanish studies extend to once-a-week lessons over a three month period and I'll admit I wasn't the most serious student ever. *blushes* It's a lovely language, though, which is why I wanted to study it in the first place, and I'd really like to include some more of it in the story. Also, thanks for your vote! ;-)

[iryann]

No problem! I love the story already!
If I can help you with any names/terms/expressions in particular I'd love to be of assistance.
As much as I love my language, I know it's not easy to learn, I can't begin to think how hard it must be to learn Spanish without having been exposed to it from an early age. You have my respect lol

[classyronsoco]

oh my I must have more<333

please continue, number 2 sounds awesome to me~

[anoradh]

First of all, that icon is really distracting and not the most flattering sequence I've seen of Misha. *lol* Secondly, thanks for your comment! One more vote for number 2!

[anoradh]

Of course they didn't get to kiss; I'm not that easy, even though they apparently are! ;-) Ooh, a vote for number 1! Thank you! And Anna will have a part in this, I hope, even if she's not the victim.

*facepalm* I didn't even notice that tag, mainly because historical sounds too serious for this silliness. Thanks for pointing that out to me!