Fic: Kaleidoscope. Hisagi/Kira.

[antha_aryn]

I lost the original Kaleidoscope in a moment of carelessness that will scar me for the rest of my life and try as I might, I just can't write it as well. So forgive me if this is all a little...lame...T_T But I made a banner to make up for it? ENJOY!

Comments

[shiawase_ai]

Eeeeeee!! Okay, first off, I'm sorry about your USB, and I know how you feel, since I lost one of mine sometime ago too. But even though you lost the original story, I think this made up for it. ^^

[antha_aryn]

Yes, it is a horrible feeling. :( But I'm pretty much over it.

I'm glad you think so! I pretty much botched the entire thing up so it means a lot to me that you still like it! ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[calm_isolation]

OH WOW ANTHA THAT IS AMAZING!!!!

*tackles and hugs* simply amazing and beautiful and I know you had to re-write it with the loss of your flash drive and i am sure it is different what you had at first but it is simply perfect

[antha_aryn]

::cringe::

Surely you jest! T_T

Well, I did try my best so I am glad it worked for you! Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I ♥ you!!!! <3

[ceestar]

Bub-ahbuw-sjaje--random keyboard bashings-

I AM BLUSHIMG! OH. MY. GOD. YOU HAVE OUT DONE YOURSELF! Buuh I don't know what it was, ah the tenderness of their dance together? The way Shuu watched and studied Izuru's every move? The fact that two very attractive men stood in each others arms, in suits and kissed?! Antha that was stunning, my cheeks are literally tingling and I can barely catch my breath!

It was just so irresitably sweet my teeth are about to fall out, seriously! I can feel it! My breath is short and my heart is pounding!! I don't know what else to say, but buuuuhhh you get the idea right???

Oooh and again I'm sorry about your USB, but THIS was the "less awesome" version?! Yikes...

[antha_aryn]

8D

Oh, Cee, you are adorable. ♥ I am glad it gave you that reaction! That is seriously awesome and my fic made you feel all that? AWESOME!

And yeah this was the "less awesome" version because two weeks of effort cannot be done in one night. So thank you so much for the lovely awesome as hell comment! I am SO glad you like it! YOU ARE TOO KIND!!!!! T_T I ♥ you to no end!

[silverharmony]

Really lovely introspective fic (as usual, Antha!). And I love the ending. I'm just sorry to hear that you had to write that all over again o_o

[antha_aryn]

Lol yeah, that's what I get for being such as careless turd. XD

Thank you, I'm glad you think so! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[erinilliana]

This was incredible. ♥

The style you wrote it in flowed very well. Your choice of words and how you executed them is superb. You can just see the image of everything that's happen so clearly.

I admit that my favorite part was the whole dancing scenario. The details and how Shuuhei observed Izuru were beautiful. Everyone needs someone like Izuru to dance with some time in their life, haha.

It's a shame you had to rewrite it. This is amazing as it though, so the original must have been great. You did it justice either way.

[antha_aryn]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so. I worked so hard on this (took me two weeks, damn it) but I lost the original file when i lost my flashdrive so I just whipped this up from memory. A lot of the details were lost but I am glad you liked it all the same.

And yes, such an intimate and lovely scene with these two. Had I been in the same dance floor, I would've dragged them both home with me. XD

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥