Love's Sorrow Chapter 9

Nov 05, 2011 21:15

Title: Love's Sorrow
Author: aoi_jihyo
Length: 09/20
Pairing: Yoosu, Jaechun (slight)
Genre: Angst/Smut/Romance
Rating: R
Warning: Probable m-preg
Summary: Junsu was aware that the man was his brother-in-law. Yoochun wasn't his and he knew it. But Junsu's darkest side still wanted him, it desired him. It was a question of pride, wasn't it?

Wasn’t it?

Junsu couldn’t stop his tears from falling. He didn’t want Yoochun to see them, but it was just too hard to keep them inside of him.~ )

pairing: jaechun, genre: drama, genre: romance, length: chaptered (ongoing), rating: r, genre: angst, pairing: yoosu

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missyoosu November 6 2011, 03:00:25 UTC
TT___TT My heart broke when I read the last part. Yoochun telling Junsu that he doesn't love him and that he can't leave Jaejoong. I could imagine how painful that must have felt for Junsu. Maybe it'd be best if he just give up on his love for Yoochun since he's (Junsu) hurting too much. Thanks for the update. I would volunteer to be your beta, but school takes up too much time.

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:17:58 UTC
*cries with you*

Is too complicated, and things are getting worse ;_;

thank you, honey, you concentrate in school *I have to do the same* but is nice of you to give a feedback about it ^^

thanks for the comment as well

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marione_ki November 6 2011, 04:26:29 UTC
wow!! Lo dejaste con mucha intriga en serio.. muero por saber que pasara en el proximo capitulo.
I love Junsu's character I mean even if its wrong what he do to his brother with Yoochun but come on How it not possible to fall in love with Yoochun.. He already is acting like a bad guy but its only he doesn't want to accept his real feelings for Su! and doesn't want to hurt JJ his husband .. its really difficult for him.. what can he do!! ;S..

About your style ..Well I understand what you want to transmit :D so don't worry You're doing really well ;D

thanks for post this new chapter I love this fic!! xoxo :P
Yoosu love is the best ;D

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:23:46 UTC
lol I suddenly see spanish and began to freak out, I thought I was in the wrong fic or something.

Anyways, yes, it is really complicated, it must be really hard for all the characters to get themselves out of all the trouble they created

Well thank you, bb, I guess is fine then I don't have to worry about the style thingy anymore ^^

Thanks for commenting

Nos vemos <3

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shine_xd November 6 2011, 04:35:18 UTC
spot~~~~~~~~~

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shine_xd November 6 2011, 04:54:27 UTC
the more Junsu hurts, the more i like reading lol~ *i'm so mean, right?*

“We cannot have all we want, Junsu"
somehow i love that line. Everyone know that is the fact, especially Junsu but he just can't accepts it. He knows but don't want to admit, he still want the word 'i love you too' from Yoochun, that would hurts him more and more ;_;

thanks for updating bb <3

btw, u need a beta? oh, can i be your beta? i online in LJ almost everyday lol~
if u don't want me, still ok XD~

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:28:14 UTC
OMG, SUN!! I would really appreciate it, bb, yes, I noticed that you are here almost everyday kekeke, you are always really fast with your comments.

Yes, I actually understand all the characters sometimes we do selfish things without stopping to think if is the right thing or not, but yes, it must be really painful to know that the person that you love doesn't love you back

Thanks for the comment, I'll PM you, ok

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pawshingo November 6 2011, 07:46:55 UTC
Junau, Junau, Junau.... That's stark reality in your face! He knows where he stands and yet, he still asks Yoochun about his feelings! I'm glad Youngjae is gone (for the moment or forever?) But still things aren't going anywhere the three of them. I like that tense, uncomfortable atmosphere u created in the restaurant,

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:30:35 UTC
Junau, Junau, Junau... Yes you are right, bb. Yes, Youngjae was just creating more trouble. Thank you, yeah, it was kind of uncomfortable kekeke

well, thanks for the comment ^^

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drtrypanophobic November 6 2011, 08:40:37 UTC
there is hope for junsu after all *____* omg the ending ;~~~; yoochun, his actions clearly speaks louder than words even though he refuses to admit it to junsu or himself. junsu just needs an extra little push to make yoochun completely his (though, omg jaejoong ilu, im so sorry for you)

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:33:00 UTC
yeah, actions do speak louder than words, I do know about that ;_;
but, anyways, is so frustrating when you have to make a choice that will hurt someone at the end

thanks for the comment ^^

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