Love's Sorrow Chapter 9

Nov 05, 2011 21:15

Title: Love's Sorrow
Author: aoi_jihyo
Length: 09/20
Pairing: Yoosu, Jaechun (slight)
Genre: Angst/Smut/Romance
Rating: R
Warning: Probable m-preg
Summary: Junsu was aware that the man was his brother-in-law. Yoochun wasn't his and he knew it. But Junsu's darkest side still wanted him, it desired him. It was a question of pride, wasn't it?

Wasn’t it?

Junsu couldn’t stop his tears from falling. He didn’t want Yoochun to see them, but it was just too hard to keep them inside of him.~ )

pairing: jaechun, genre: drama, genre: romance, length: chaptered (ongoing), rating: r, genre: angst, pairing: yoosu

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samunin November 7 2011, 00:37:26 UTC
yoochun you lie!
ugh sobs my yoosu heart
tho i love jae...but still
yoosu <3333
dammit someone sweep jae away from yoochun
so yoosu can get together
but it wont be a happy ending will it?
T-T sobs

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 02:38:30 UTC
That's a secret ;_;

I wish I could tell you everything but things are so weird even for me

thanks for the comment ^^

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ieie_luph November 7 2011, 09:16:11 UTC
I cry T__T
Junsu ya... I know how hurt you are..
yoochun, please love junsu more.. and divorce with jaejoong....pleasee..
I beg you T__T

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aoi_jihyo November 7 2011, 12:02:15 UTC
;_;

we all beg you! *sobs*

thank you for the comment ^^

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ting5 November 10 2011, 02:05:11 UTC
Sigh even if many will say Su brought this upon himself but still my heart hurts on his behalf. I know Jae is hurting too and he's prob the most innocent party in this love triangle.

But selfish of me or whatnot I would hope that Yoosu can pull through though part of me is saying that Chun does not deserve the love selfish or not Su has for him. I wonder will it surprise him if Su does let him go.

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ting5 November 10 2011, 02:12:40 UTC
And I think your fic pretty much flows very well and I can get what you're trying to convey in each chapter so don't worry too much.

I can't offer to beta since I'm already helping one friend/author and uni is just more busy this sem. But I hope you;ll find someone soon.

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aoi_jihyo November 10 2011, 02:41:26 UTC
you are so right ;_; Su's selfish love is really sad but I can understand him.

Thank you, that makes me feel better because I was really confused about what the girl meant, she never told me.

Is ok, bb, There was a girl that decided to help me ^^ but you work hard as well, is really nice of you to think of that ^^

thanks you for the comment

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ting5 November 12 2011, 22:26:45 UTC
No problem, glad you have help now :)

Always ♥

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n_a_l_e_y November 10 2011, 18:33:33 UTC
I simply love this story!!!! Jae is my bias so my heart breaks every time I read this.....but I simply love it!!!! I HATE cheating ppl and I cud strangle Yoosu for doing this to Jae!!! But I love the way you write!!! ^___^

pls keep it up!!! Hope to see an update soon......ciaooooo

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aoi_jihyo November 10 2011, 22:12:31 UTC
*blushes*

it feels nice to know that you like it, thank you a lot <3

Yeah, I don't like cheating people but anyways for the sake of the story ^^

thank you for the comment

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samchun55 March 24 2012, 00:10:00 UTC
i feel so bad for both jae and su T-T they both love chun so much :(( i'm speechless >< .....

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