Comments | ap_aelfwine: [Fic]: On a Bright Summer Morning, part four: Ginny's Escape (5100 words)

ap_aelfwine

[Fic]: On a Bright Summer Morning, part four: Ginny's Escape (5100 words)

Oct 24, 2013 20:52

On a Bright Summer Morning, part four: Ginny's Escape ( Read more... )

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nothorse October 25 2013, 05:32:59 UTC

Sweet. I like the perfectly childish -- in a good way -- internal monologue.

ap_aelfwine October 27 2013, 00:20:26 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad Ginny's internal monologue comes off believably--it's a while since I've spent much time round children of her age.

wsr October 28 2013, 01:57:17 UTC

*huggles*

So sweet. They all sound like themselves, but _saner_.

Looking forward to more!

ap_aelfwine October 28 2013, 23:57:45 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad you like them.

They all sound like themselves, but _saner_.

Delighted to hear that. I'm hoping to get more out soon, although NaNo might stand in the way for a little while.

dukebrymin December 31 2013, 05:42:57 UTC

I can just see Ginny's new rallying cry: Feed Ron to the haggis ( ... )

ap_aelfwine January 6 2014, 23:38:46 UTC

Thank you!

And sorry I'm so late replying--I seem to be pants at that, lately.

I've always liked the younger stories (as you probably guessed), because the writing for them is authentic (at least, in my mind). The one story I can think of where they're older (the one about Luna's pet Millie) I'm not as taken by the characterizations. I'm not sure why, and I wish I could better explain what I think feels different. That's interesting. If you can think of anything in that vein, please let me know, cos I'm always trying to improve with this and I can use all the data I can get ( ... )