Comments | apeeling: characterdeath!au

apeeling

characterdeath!au

Aug 20, 2013 23:02

Title: characterdeath!au
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Note: side sequel to this

( Kyungsoo is thirteen when he falls in love. Love feels a lot like wrapping himself in cotton candy and bathing in sweetness. Love feels like clarity and fuzzy pastel colors in the background of his dreams where his Prince Charming will lean in closer and they’ll kiss and everything bleeds out to white. )

pairing:jongin/kyungsoo, !fanfic

Comments 8

kyngs August 21 2013, 06:33:54 UTC

screams first, shoves but here

kyngs August 21 2013, 06:34:00 UTC

butt*---EDIT
GOD I DIDNT KNOW I CAN EDIT THIS SHIT. LIVEJOURNAL WHEN DID YOU UPDATE I THOUGHT YOU WERE STUCK IN 2002

thisismylastlie August 21 2013, 06:48:04 UTC

WHOA. DID U JUST POST THIS OMFG WHOA. SPOT. WHOA. WHEN. WHOA. SPOT. WOW. SPOT. SPOT SPOT SPOT SPOT i still haven't gone back to my other spot for the other fic cRIES BUT FOR NOW SPOT

thisismylastlie August 21 2013, 06:56:27 UTC

wow i should not have read this rn omg but i couldn't help it but reading this makes me nOT WANT TO READ THE OTHER BC IF THIS BROKE MY HEART WHO KNOWS WHAT THE OTHER WILL DO FUCK poor junmyun ;_;

((but kaisoo hehehehehehehehehehhEHEHEHEH KAISOO BABY))

ALSO --> "Love is so much more simpler without added variables." FUCKING LOVED THIS

so anyway this fic went from heartbreaking to KAWAII LITTLE SHITS to heartbreaking again
tracy
w h y
yOU CAN'T JUST GO AROUND COLLECTING UR JAR OF HEARTS OKAY MAN OMG

no but srsly i wanted to smack jongin in the face in the beginning of the fic tbh

u can have a jar of my tears tho

ilkhjoong August 21 2013, 07:42:15 UTC

your writing is /so/ whimsical im in love ;~~~;♥especially the introductory paragraph. my mind was blown while rereading it a couple times im srs
the way you describe kyungsoo's feelings for jongin sounds so real ;; idk how you do it but I can actually feel kyungsoo's hurt and obsession for jongin
near the end I was afraid jongin would randomly ditch kyungsoo and kyungsoo would kill himself but instead they got married which is so much better lolol
thank you for writing! im glad I read because your writing is truly b e a u t i f u l ♥there are no words im speechlesssss

apeeling August 21 2013, 16:12:19 UTC

YOU ARE SO SWEET ;A; ♥
love is not alwyas certain is it? but it worked out anyways keke. b(=w=)d
thank you for reading kekekeeke

chinnupan September 18 2013, 06:06:00 UTC

omg the ending .. i was preparing myself for the inevitable sad endin but then it was JONDGAE and not kyungsoo and kyungsoo doesnt even know and joonmyeon still loves him and jongdae loves joonmyeon and my heart just broke into pieces and im crying right now .. and i dont cry over fics! (ok maybe once or twice but thats it!) .. i mean i didnt even cry in the actual fic (felt bad and my heart clenched really bad, but no tears) ... this one had me nearly brawling

god this was so sad ... and great ... i like how you incorporated jongdae into it ... theres like two unrequited love going on and its just so sad .. well at least kyungsoo got his happy ending ...

You made me cry. Hence you are amazing. The end.

hachannie September 29 2013, 04:24:35 UTC

why you do this to my kokoro semenpie