Proceed With Caution

[appassionata1]

Title: Proceed With Caution (1/6)
Author: appassionata1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count:3,240 (chapter 1)
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are property of CBS and Telenext Media. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: When sixteen year old Luke Grimaldi goes missing while on a ski trip with friends, a top secret organization lead by Noah Mayer

Comments

[sarahsezlove]

What an exciting start, Faye.
I'm looking forward to more.

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much. Chapter 2 is coming soon.

Awesome

[merlin1900]

Well done Faye , hooked already ....

Re: Awesome

[appassionata1]

Thanks. So glad I was able to reel you in with the first chapter :)

[cindyls1969]

well, this is amazing isn't it? I can't wait to see where you take this! Sigh, Kevin is a jackass as always, and poor Luke the loser in the bio-dad lottery! Great job....

[appassionata1]

Aww, thanks. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Yep, Kevin is an insecure idiot here. I always wondered what poor Luke ever saw in him. I guess Luke was just as insecure and terrified of not fitting in. So many young people and adults are friends with the most awful people just because they yearn to be a part of something. They need to learn that sometimes its ok to be by yourself if your only choice of friends is a jerk.

[newhaven183]

Whoa... what a start. More twists and turns than a corkscrew... and just the first chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next.

[appassionata1]

Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the twists and turns because there are many more to come :)

[wheelie47]

Wow! What a start, Faye. Such high drama! Poor Luke - what on earth has happened to him? And I must say I love this US Marine Noah. Very sexy!Looking forward to see where you take this!

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much. I love writing Noah as confident, forceful, and a bit snarky. So glad you like my version :) You'll find out what's happened to Luke very soon.