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25lively November 12 2009, 00:36:02 UTC
This was really beautifully written. Cuddy is one of my favorite characters on the show, so it's great to see someone explore her, in such a well thought out way.

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applesred November 12 2009, 10:40:07 UTC
Thank you very much! Cuddy is such a complex character and there are so many avenues in her personality to delve into.

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blackie_da_minx November 12 2009, 22:07:49 UTC

Great concept, lovely flow to the writing!

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applesred November 13 2009, 06:15:32 UTC
Thank you very much!

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tree November 13 2009, 12:02:26 UTC
this is very lovely in places - you have a nice grasp of cuddy and a gentle, yet strong narrative voice. i would definitely recommend finding a beta, though.

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applesred November 13 2009, 12:17:53 UTC
Thank you for the comment! I'll see to getting one in the future.

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swatkat24 November 13 2009, 12:28:10 UTC
This is gorgeous, gorgeous. I love the fragments of her life, and how she is so herself in all of them.

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applesred November 14 2009, 13:26:40 UTC
Thank you so much! She's such a hard character to write because you always have to find a balance between her strength and her softness without it becoming weakness. Glad you liked it!

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roga November 13 2009, 13:04:37 UTC
Oh, this is gorgeous. (And betas are always good, but nothing in this story particularly indicated to me that you needed one.)

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applesred November 14 2009, 13:28:41 UTC
Thank you! (And it's embarrassing to admit what a great relief it is to hear you say that.)

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