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topaz_eyes November 13 2009, 17:35:02 UTC
This is a beautiful series of vignettes.

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applesred November 14 2009, 13:29:16 UTC
Thank you very much!

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hannahrorlove November 13 2009, 22:38:05 UTC
Everything's balanced just right between solid and ephemeral, and I think goldfish is my favorite section - the mundane tragedy and very vivid physical description of the fish itself.

Good read. Thank you for sharing.

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applesred November 14 2009, 13:36:25 UTC
Cuddy is an overachiever in every way and to fail at preserving the life of something as small as a fish was interesting to explore. I'm glad I got some stuff right.

And thank you for taking the time to comment!

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blookynose November 20 2009, 10:05:03 UTC
The struggle of Cuddy against herself. The beauty of it lies in the fact that she recognizes her flaws and tries to live with them...succeeding ànd failing.

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applesred November 20 2009, 15:55:34 UTC
Lovely comment. She does try to live with them and always forges on ahead despite all the things she's lost.

Thank you for reviewing!

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